Wonderful work, I love this story more and more with every chapter I read :D looking forward to the next!

Your writing is fantastic and very entertaining update soon!

Wow. I just read all 19 chapters and it is really really good. I can't wait to see what happens with Tezock and that island. I still wish you hadn't killed Inar off but Deryne/Rikash wouldn't be too bad. And HOW DARE YOU KILL JON?!

Aww. Poor Jon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Sarah

I knew it was Jon! Why? I need more asap!

You're killing Jon? I understand that you still need Myles, and this explains why he's still here, but Jon? It makes me cry. And who was the girl? It couldn't have been any of the Chosen, Cyne or Deryne because the Gods need them, right? So who was the girl Yama (it was Yama right?) wanted to trade for Myles? and the Knight, which one? Was it Cadel? Great fic by the way, and your two others before this. I discovered the Jaguar Goddess two days ago, and I've made it to this. I would have reviewed earlier but usually don't review completed fics, and FF was acting weird. I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon!

So Jon's going to die? Am I cruel if I say, better him than Myles? LOL. Update soon.
Sarah

Ooh! Very interesting... Although, Deryene's god called the island she saw in her dream "One Island"... and yet your title is "The Two Islands". Hum...
And which girl was the wavewalker originally intending to sacrifice in the place of Myles?
Shang Leopard

Gah I can figure out who the girl is that was gonna die until they replaced her with Jon! I take it though that Cadel is the favorite knight? A tiny hint? lol Anyway really enjoyed the chapter : ) Looking forward to the next one!

Oh, fascinating chapter. Particularly interesting was the gods talking about the balance. I'd never thought of the particulars of what would be required for the gods to manipulate events and still maintain that balance.
The hints are very nice too.
“Then the favorite. The knight-”
“It is already written that he will be the one to-”
My curiosity is piqued once again. So basically, another excellent chapter. I'm glad you're updating again :D

What happens when you don't run this by me first:

"every muscle ached as he bent forward, HIS WIZENED face mere inches away from the parchment"

"he had never thought he WOULD live to say that about Jon’s father"

"she might have as well looked into her own eyes." She might as well have been looking into her own eyes.

"The penalty is death, not that the penalty for MORTALITY isn‘t always"

"An upside (DELETE COMMA) to all those pesky gudruna"

"She stopped, as events PAST flooded PAST her." Same word twice.

"He was the one person with whom you could not RELY on what gifts I gave you."

"Gaian and Yama cannot protect their chosen as I can you- (t)hey grow weak as your friend(s) approach the Seraph."

Also: YOU KILLED JON YOU EVIL PERSON YOU. *cries*

*ahem* Other than grammar stuff and your penchant for killing off canon characters, very nice chapter. More soon, please? (And run it by me first next time, k?)

~Kyrie

But when you write about Inar (even if you don't mention his name) it makes me all depressed. It would be easier for me to have him possessed by Roger then gone forever, though. I miss him already. I'll keep reading anyway. This story should be interesting. Poor Deryne. So much to deal with.

So is Inar ever going to make a guest appearance as a ghost? Cause that would be great. :-) Update soon (hopefully with some fluff)
Sarah

Seriously? Not even ONE kiss? There better be one in the next chapter! LOL. :-)
Sarah

Woohoo!

Sorry, just got back from the horrible world of exams and in enough time to review and whatnot and catch up! xD

Well, this is absolutely cool. Chaos everywhere, and it would be really *cough* nice *cough* a sad pity if Rikash lost his temper and barbecqued Roger for dinner (:

Regards,

-Cymru