That was pretty interesting. o-o

If your talking about the Sharon Draper Jerico i freakin love her book. But anyway this story was awsome ;)

Oh. My god.

I WANNA READ THE REST! XD This is already beautiful, even if it's just pieces of a longer story! I loved the descriptors, the plot, the dialouge, agh, I loved everything! XD Please continue to be awesome!

(*The worldloves you*)

oh! oh what a pretty story!

Brilliant plot. Now it makes me wonder what would it really take for Ulquiorra and Grimmjow to first, work together as a team and second, bring down Las Noches by themselves.

You mentioned that this is part of the trilogy. I checked your livejournal but I could not find the other sequels. Are they perhaps f-locked due to the fics' ratings?

*Speechless*

Really. I don't know what to say.

wow...that's really really good! Awesome story line, and really well written!

Ahh..what is this warm, fluttery feeling I feel in my chest? :D very nice, thanks for posting this. if only the real story had turned out this way...

I fucking hate Aizen lol

I like it.

One question, though...what happened to them? (I'm sorry if that's a stupid question...I'm just that stupid. ;)

I was like -GASP- at the stupidest times. I really liked it.

I can't find any more words to describe it other than the fact that it was beautiful. It made me happy.

I've always wanted these two to work together and topple Las Noches. Nice writing!

To say that this story is excellent does not due it proper justice. I've been a fan of this pairing for quite a while, but I've never seen it brought to this level before. I love the set-up of the story, each scene divided from the others. It lets you focus on each event without having to add transitional material to tie them together. I love the interactions between the characters, aside from Ulquiorra/Grimmjow I like how the two of them interact with Orihime. I love the happy(?) ending, and it's semi-open-ended state. This is one of the best stories I read in a long time, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

You and your genius mind, most in-character story for this pairing I've read, brilliant.

Whoa...

Okay, I never liked this pairing, and I never read yaoi, but damn...this was awesome! Perfectly in character (a huge requirement for me when reading any fic!) and extremely well written. I also have to thank you for having virtually no spelling/grammar mistakes. I still don't like the pairing, but very well done :D

wow, that was. . .beautiful. Don't think Ive ever read something quite that meaningful for GrimmxUlqui. Wonderful job! .

Hugs and Kisses

LPGurrl

i read this at lj and i love it!

glad to see it here..

now, i can favorite it! :)