 Ha-Hee Prime 2009-08-10 . chapter 1THIS WAS AWESOME!
I loved it, loved it, loved it.
It's so fun to see Prime a little differently from his usual careful self-control...
Great writing, great plotting, great characterization; great story.
Thank you. |
 Borath 2009-08-03 . chapter 1This was a thoroughly enjoyable read - well thought out, wonderfully paced and you have the guys down pat. Excellent stuff. |
 Dagger Kitsune 2009-06-28 . chapter 1I swear to whatever higher diety that I giggled at this. Drunk!Prime was very amusing. I enjoyed the serious parts too.
Thanks for the funny/interesting story.
~Dagger |
 Ariel D 2009-06-24 . chapter 1This is an extremely touching story, with a good mix of humor thrown in with the pain. Extremely well-done. |
 Dragon260 2009-04-23 . chapter 1“What happens on the road, stays on the road.”
It's very much like "What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas"
Or in me and my friends case, "What happens at a party/sleepover, stays in the party/sleepover."
And all of them are true, oh so very true.
...And I couldn't help but stare at the screen that Elita-One and Optimus are siblings! |
 Yami-Yugi3 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Aw ^_^ Poor Optimus. |
 CoraxOnyx 2009-01-30 . chapter 1This was very cute. I'm not generally a fan of "overenergized" stories as they tend to be an excuse for rampant OOC-ness, but you did a great job with the characters' voices and the little details. And any story that gives Sparkplug a little love is dandy. I particularly liked the line about Prime being a "maudlin drunk", perhaps some of his comic book incarnation's characterization sneaking in? (Darn Furman and his emo!Prime) Nice work and please keep writing. |
 Negare 2008-12-22 . chapter 1There's a very sparse amount of good transformer fanfiction that is actually really funny.
However, this hit the nail on the head. A fantastic piece and defintely been added to my favourites! |
 Nuclear Chick 2008-12-17 . chapter 1This was really quite good. I hope you will do more stories like this, I quite enjoyed it :) |
 SUPERNICH 2008-12-15 . chapter 1HA! This is a hilarious and well written fic! I love it (espcially the part about Elita-1, oh i almost fell out of my chair laughing) Nice Job! |
 Jessie07 2008-12-15 . chapter 1Awesome story! I really liked it a lot! |
 Shadir 2008-12-14 . chapter 1Very funny and fantastic ^^ |
 Ksiezniczka 2008-12-14 . chapter 1This was very cute. Love the character interactions and little details. |
 Cassiopeia1979 2008-12-14 . chapter 1that was sweet. and an appropriate title too. Heh |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-12-14 . chapter 1I like this. It's one of those rare moments between the lighter side of human/TF interaction that makes me smile.
Ah, Optimus and Elita... Well, the whole thing them of having the same creator is in the eye of the beholder. :3 |