Oh my, that was so friggin sad.

Why do I feel something wet on my cheek? :(

Please do a sequel/companion! Ichigo was in his human form right? Any chance they find eachother in SS and have a happy, sappy and fluffly ending?

Great fic!

This was beautiful! It was well-written, and I think you captured their personalities well.

I hope you write a companion piece to this!

Especially considering since it was his human body dying and not his soul...But I don't know what you're planning, so whatever

Oh my god this is sad! But it's also pretty good.

aw so sad... then rukia ended up killing herself?

OMG I'm crying right now! This was just so heartbreakingly sad and well done! Great job, you really showed the emotions perfectly.

Interesting take on it, but emo/dramatic Rukia doesn't appeal to me.

I'm suprised you didn't explain why Orihime was in Ichigo's bed either. The fact that Ichigo was so obtuse to Rukia's confession was strange. Ichigo isn't the type to just let Rukia walk away that easily either.

The dark Ichigo bit was ok, but not quite original.

It was well written, despite it being in the first person perspective.

Good Effort,
Fathom

Hi!

Great fic! Kinda confused though. So was Ichigo actually with Inoue?

this...
is...
great.
i dont know why, but somehow the stories i like best are the ones where a character dies...
weird.
but yeah, this is very well done, great job!