awesome so far!

I actually think that Gibbs deserves a lot of this. He hurt her so much, and it's only logical that she would want to protect her child from that.

i think the story was relly great!
although, the baby being born in the elevator was kinda disturbing..
but otherwise, it was a really great story! :)

Aw man, you really gotta feel sorry for Tony, Ziva, McGee, and Palmer. Like Tony said, it has to be REALLY bad for even the assasin to go into hiding.

Uh oh, this could get messy.

Good chapter. Todd is a really nice guy. There is one mistake though. The Mayo Clinic you're talking about is in Rochester Minnesota, not New York. Other than that, great so far.

Gibbs is a total JERK in this chapter! I hope he comes to his senses soon!

that was fantastic!! Thanks for finishing it! I loved the epilogue

Lovely story! And very sweet ending. I love it. I'd love to be in on that bet ;)

excellent ending. loved it. it was fun adn flirty and eveything in one. oh and count me in on that bet. another little jibblet. would that be a hint at a sequel? anyway. great story loved all of it.

Yay...you did do an epilogue! Loved this!

Nice ending, very fun. Just wondering, who was the best man? I guessed Tony, but my guesses are almost always wrong. :)

Oh I do! I wanna bet! Excellent work! I love it!

It was really really sweet!

I must say that I really loved it!

And I'm in on that bet - baby sister in 9 months and yet another addition a couple of years later!

LOL

Great story! Loved it!

is there a sequel in the works? or even a one shot with tony trying to take care of matt while jenny and jethro are on their honeymoon. i think both would be very good ideas.