I'll finish reading this later, m'kay?

aww u havent finished the story :'( i was really into it! its soooo good!

ok thank you for explaining :)

life does get chaotic sometimes.

Great story! are you going to continue? i noticed you havent updated in about a year...

I love this whole thing. It is amazing! Personally I think you should write more to it because it was absolutely wonderful. Plus, Bloody Jack is one of my favorite series and I think that this follows the stories pretty well. Please, don't get mad but I would like to offer some constructive critisism. The only thing that I would change is that in this Jacky calls him James all the time where as in the books she mosyl calls him Jaimy. Other then that I love it and am going to show it to all of my friends!

What a really good story! I truly enjoyed reading it!

You're doing a fantastic job keeping everyone in character...the story reads just like one of the books! Please update soon.

please tell me you are going tot finish this story i cant wait to see how joseph and randall react to comming home just in time for the wedding

so good! please keep writing if you get the chance!

sweet

this was really interesting. you really know the characters. this series is amazing. i can't wait to see if there will be another book after my bonny light horseman. thanks for satisfying my curiostity. you are a really good writer.

Omg, i love it i love it i love it i love it. Its pretty dang good! Just one thing though, instead of using modern day cuss, try and filter that and insert the type of stuff that they would use then. Idk, just something i thought was a wee bit off. lol. but overall i really really like. keep it up!

Hey, this is delightful! Please keep it up, and quickly. I finally gave up waiting for a finished Bloody Jack fic to pop up and delved into the unfinished ones (yours is one of approximately two, gah!) and now I'm stuck in suspense mode. Alas! But, I approve of this fic, and will love you forever if you continue. Preferably quickly but, you know, just in general would be good too.

That was a good chapter, I can't wait for the next one.

write more soon! this is really good!