That was very good. I liked it very much. Please keep writing.

Oh, I feel so sorry for Carlisle. He basicly watched his father die. I know what it feels like to watch your dad die. But instead of an old church, it was in a hospital.

Fantastic! You have a wonderfully descriptive, eloquent writing style. Please write more Twilight fics!

Luv

squee

Wow! I couldn't find the right words to say. I feel like crying now... This is beautifully written! You captured the essence of Carlisle. Man... I'm speechless!

I started laughing for some reason when I saw the e-mail notification pop up in my inbox. I haven't gotten an alert from in forever!

Anyway.

I love the moral of the story.

Really good way of interpreting that scripture.

That was very touching. I feel that you accurately portrayed what Carlisle meeting his father again would be like... it was very well written and well worth the read.