Ah! What happens? And it's nice Jackie lives . . . or might live. It's been a while, I know, but if you COULD update, you'd be my favorite person. Thanks for writing as muxh as you have!

This Alt!Jackie is much better than the original alt.

"Have I mentioned lately how fantastic you are?" Rose asked, nearly

skipping as they walked down the street.

"Nope," the Doctor replied. "An' if you ever say it when I haven't just

endangered the fabric of the universe, then I might actually believe it."

"Have I mentioned lately that you're a bit melodramatic?"

I love it, I love it, I love it!

OK, so it's Nine and Rose acting out the plot and much of the dialogue from Rise of the Cybermen. May I ask, what is the point?

OUch!

Well done, once again. You do such a great job of letting the characters act naturally, changing events as necessary but keeping the main story arc in sight :)

Oh, thank you! Yet another 9Rose adventure :) Looking forward to the next update!