That was weird. BTW, stories that mention sex should be rated T.

Oh sad...I think I'll go cry now. Short and sweet.

I like how it was put together. I even felt my heart go numb when he told her that he was getting married.

Wow.

Wow, that so poetic... I love sophisticated poetry... They're so deep... This story was sad though... It could have made me cry if it happened in the real series...

very similar to my story... but better... LOLz ^_^ the title are quite ALMOST the same too... it's a great story... I should've written mine like yours ^_^

Wow, I really like this.
It's amazing... somehow it reminds me of my darker days but I don't think I would ever come up with something that... poetic? I don't know, I can't find the word.
Either way it's great and the only thing I could see "wrong" was the wedding vow. It didn't flow right... isn't it "in sickness and health"?
Anyway, good job and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!

Wolf

omg that was so sad
damn neji and he's supposedly a genius took him a damn long time lol
this is such a great story even if u did kill off my fav charater lol

That was extremely depressing. Yet, that was very well written. Good job!

Oh gawd that was sad. This is my favorite couple but...but...*sniffles*

Great job. I'd probably die of a broken heart too if Neji married Tenten. Oh I cant bear the thought...

But man that was sad. :[ Great job. Short yet full of emotion.

What got me was the last two sentences "Hinata was his freedom...and he was her life". Powerful. *sniffles*