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CoolCat98
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
This is so sad, but good.
ElianaMargalit
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
So apparently I haven't read this yet. I don't know how that happened.

I made the Simon/Old Testament connection right away, but that's just me. xD.

I love this story. I know, I know, my reviews are so unoriginal. xP.
xtapx
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
This was amazing. I love the fact that Leah calls Bella out on her crap. Bella has always been one who lives in her own world, and only cares about whats going on with her, so it was nice to see Bella from Leah's POV for a while.

I have to admit that this was kinda sad, but it was a good sad, although I wish Jacob didn't imprint on Nessie, this was still amazing!
Kelly123
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
I really really really hate Bella.

Actually, that's not fair. I don't hate Bella, I hate Kristen Stewart playing Bella, which in turn made me hate the character. So I'm glad she finally got hers. Thanks.
JeNeParlentPasVraimentFrancais
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
finally! it's about time someone realizes what a ** bella is! i hate her! and that eveil, evil renesmee girl! BAH!

goleah, goleah, goleah, WOOHOO! (sorry leah's my fave charector)

does simon know? like, about werewolves?
addictedbooklover
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
you're such a good writer, this story is amazing
Rose Gilmore
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
omg
totally sad! (the part about jacob leaving leah and their SON!!)
again, totally sad.
but well written
ellaa.
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
WOW
this is breathtaking, you are a really talented writer.
amazing job :)
Anidori-Kiladra
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
Once again, a wonderful addition to your Twilight fanfic. It was disconnected, but I think it definitely worked. And some lines were gasp-worthy they were so wonderful. Well done.
~Ani
madameXblack
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
wow...
that was...
wow...
gorgeous...
heart-breaking...
i love it...
Ride or Die
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
LOVED. IT.

I would really love to see this turned into something more because it's so good and so sad. A confrontation between Jacob and Leah... *facesmash*
Mac-alicious
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
I loved this. I just started reading Twilight fanfiction. This was just great. That one line about Jacob, it was just perfect. It hit him dead on the mark. Wonderful job!

~Mac
Ada Lovelace
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
I freaking LOVED it!
Fanfiction is gay like
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
i like it
=]
eyeglassed cat
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
Great story... serve her right. At least now she knows what she had done... geez an absolutely egoistical girl. I never like Bella from the start... and Reneemese. What the hell is she... you right about calling her a spawn. The idea of her is just... abominable!
Haha... I'm fuming now. But you're the best!
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