 CoolCat98 2009-07-20 . chapter 1This is so sad, but good. |
 ElianaMargalit 2009-05-29 . chapter 1So apparently I haven't read this yet. I don't know how that happened.
I made the Simon/Old Testament connection right away, but that's just me. xD.
I love this story. I know, I know, my reviews are so unoriginal. xP. |
 xtapx 2009-04-08 . chapter 1This was amazing. I love the fact that Leah calls Bella out on her crap. Bella has always been one who lives in her own world, and only cares about whats going on with her, so it was nice to see Bella from Leah's POV for a while.
I have to admit that this was kinda sad, but it was a good sad, although I wish Jacob didn't imprint on Nessie, this was still amazing! |
 Kelly123 2009-03-14 . chapter 1I really really really hate Bella.
Actually, that's not fair. I don't hate Bella, I hate Kristen Stewart playing Bella, which in turn made me hate the character. So I'm glad she finally got hers. Thanks. |
 JeNeParlentPasVraimentFrancais 2009-01-03 . chapter 1finally! it's about time someone realizes what a ** bella is! i hate her! and that eveil, evil renesmee girl! BAH!
goleah, goleah, goleah, WOOHOO! (sorry leah's my fave charector)
does simon know? like, about werewolves? |
 addictedbooklover 2008-12-29 . chapter 1you're such a good writer, this story is amazing |
 Rose Gilmore 2008-12-25 . chapter 1omg
totally sad! (the part about jacob leaving leah and their SON!!)
again, totally sad.
but well written |
 ellaa. 2008-12-20 . chapter 1WOW
this is breathtaking, you are a really talented writer.
amazing job :) |
 Anidori-Kiladra 2008-12-20 . chapter 1 Once again, a wonderful addition to your Twilight fanfic. It was disconnected, but I think it definitely worked. And some lines were gasp-worthy they were so wonderful. Well done.
~Ani |
 madameXblack 2008-12-15 . chapter 1wow...
that was...
wow...
gorgeous...
heart-breaking...
i love it... |
 Ride or Die 2008-12-15 . chapter 1LOVED. IT.
I would really love to see this turned into something more because it's so good and so sad. A confrontation between Jacob and Leah... *facesmash* |
 Mac-alicious 2008-12-15 . chapter 1I loved this. I just started reading Twilight fanfiction. This was just great. That one line about Jacob, it was just perfect. It hit him dead on the mark. Wonderful job!
~Mac |
 Ada Lovelace 2008-12-15 . chapter 1I freaking LOVED it! |
 Fanfiction is gay like 2008-12-15 . chapter 1i like it
=] |
 eyeglassed cat 2008-12-15 . chapter 1Great story... serve her right. At least now she knows what she had done... geez an absolutely egoistical girl. I never like Bella from the start... and Reneemese. What the hell is she... you right about calling her a spawn. The idea of her is just... abominable!
Haha... I'm fuming now. But you're the best! |