Wow.. this was really great! I think you did a nice job on this. Keep up the wonderful work!

I like this story..maybe you can make a sequel or add another chapter?..

I like this story..maybe you can make a sequel or add another chapter?..

wow.

Bella's a cold hearted bitch.

you made her more like that then ever :D

Wow...a lot going on here...sad and painful and somehow very telling - a very real-life version of how this could all go, in another universe. I like your writing style.

wow this was powerful for one chapter.

amazing and excellent tension..

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This is just a short one-shot based about sixteen years in the future after the events in Breaking Dawn. It tells the story of a disconnected Bella, so consumed with her own life and her own future, she doesnt' know what's gone on around her or with those she used to once hold dear in her heart.

Her father has died of a broken one. This little one-shot...well, it's something we could all stand to appreciate, and maybe even relate to. You have to think also that it stands to reason that Bella would eventually forget about the things that were once important to her. And you also have to have respect for Leah, who has always stood on her own ground and who opens up Bella's eyes to the reality she has so carelessly disregarded.

It's different, unique, and a sad and bittersweet tale of just what could have happened in Bella and Edward's forever. Go read it.

I liked it... I always wanted Jacob to end up with Leah & was seriously pissed when Jake imprinted on Ness, LOL! I love that you used the name of one of Jacob & Leah's sons from the bible, cool idea!

This is so sad, but good.

So apparently I haven't read this yet. I don't know how that happened.

I made the Simon/Old Testament connection right away, but that's just me. xD.

I love this story. I know, I know, my reviews are so unoriginal. xP.

This was amazing. I love the fact that Leah calls Bella out on her crap. Bella has always been one who lives in her own world, and only cares about whats going on with her, so it was nice to see Bella from Leah's POV for a while.

I have to admit that this was kinda sad, but it was a good sad, although I wish Jacob didn't imprint on Nessie, this was still amazing!

I really really really hate Bella.

Actually, that's not fair. I don't hate Bella, I hate Kristen Stewart playing Bella, which in turn made me hate the character. So I'm glad she finally got hers. Thanks.

finally! it's about time someone realizes what a bitch bella is! i hate her! and that eveil, evil renesmee girl! BAH!

goleah, goleah, goleah, WOOHOO! (sorry leah's my fave charector)

does simon know? like, about werewolves?

you're such a good writer, this story is amazing

omg

totally sad! (the part about jacob leaving leah and their SON!)

again, totally sad.

but well written