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| Muffles 2003-07-17 ch 12,  | abuseI was introduced to this fic from your site, please update I'm curious this is a really good fic! |
| faerie_X 2003-03-18 ch 12, anon. | abuseHey, cool story you got here. I really like dramatic and angsty stuff. Plus, you've got a plot that extends beyond just the relationships. :) Hope you decide to write more soon |
| Alea Seikou 2003-03-10 ch 12, anon. | abuseI absolutly love your work. "Fear" is really good. Of course the fact that it has Ame/Zel hints makes it all the more enjoyable. I also love how Amelia has become a little sister to her adopted family. The bandit attacking scene was very funny. Keep up the wonderful work. |
| CT 2002-12-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat story! Will Amelia remember who she is befor or after the other find her? How will Gourry and Lina get the Sword of Light? PLEASE UPDATE!! |
| CT 2002-12-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat story! Will Amelia remember who she is befor or after the other find her? How will Gourry and Lina get the Sword of Light? PLEASE UPDATE!! |
| CT 2002-12-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat story! Will Amelia remember who she is befor or after the other find her? How will Gourry and Lina get the Sword of Light? PLEASE UPDATE!! |
| minimerc 2002-11-25 ch 12, | abuse^^ Me is loving the story thus far. When will Amelia get her memories back? Can Zel help with it? Is Phil safe? What about Zel? Can't he go and find Ame now? I mean will his urges for her lead him to go and hunt her down? What about the gem Amelia has? It has to remind her of them. Doesn't she have the crest of Sailoon with her? Why is Lina having all of these bad nightmares? If Gourry's half elf, how can he be so tall? Umm I haven't really seen Rowdy or Meilroon. ^^;;;; Could you explain what they look like in depth? Please? Anyways please write more soon. Ja ne ~minimerc |
| Suki 2002-10-01 ch 12, anon. | abuseOh My God! I totally love this fic. I couldn't even put it down. Please write the next chapter soon. Oooooooooh! I can't wait for it. I totally envy your writing style. Keep it up! Ja. |
| Aisha C 2002-06-07 ch 12, | abusecool! |
| Seigi no Hoshi 2002-04-05 ch 12, | abuseWow! This is really well written. There is plenty of suspense, and everyone is in character. The pacing of the story is also well done. I can't wait to read more! |
| fish 2002-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour story is good and heres why... i love how you cleverly string facts from slayers and weave it into your original story. your writing is sincere to the characters, and you dont make Amelia some snibiling defenceless self sacrificing twit (always crying, and trying to "save" zelgadis) I also like how zel grows when he awknowledges what his feelings really were for lina. so many things done well, please dont leave me and the other readers hangin'. ^_- |
| Astra M 2002-03-06 ch 12, | abuseAlyson! Yes! You've posted the latest chapter! And IT'S AWESOME!!! You need to be harassed more often, girl. ^_~ *crack crack crack* |
| Elderdrake 2002-03-06 ch 12, | abuseI'm *so* enjoying this tale - read it beginning to end in one session, because I just can't bring myself to wait for the next bit... more! More! |
| EverythingIsMagic 2002-03-03 ch 12, | abuseI'm so happy you are finishing this fic!!!! I love it so much! |
| Mynuet 2002-03-03 ch 12, | abuseWow. Um. Ur. Wow. That was really freaky and scary and I need for you to write the next one really, really soon. |