What a nice ending to such an interesting story. I enjoyed the read; something I never thought I'd say about a Twilight story. You've always written stories amazingly well, so I'm glad I read this.

Great story

Okay, I don't even know these characters and you made me cry.

I went away for a long time, but I saw you'd finished this story and was so excited. It's WONDERFUL! Jasper & Alice continue to be my favorite Twilight couple, and I loved your glimpse into their early years with the Cullens. Thank you thank you thank you for writing and posting!

i cant believe it's over!

i think you ended it perfectly, though. your writing is so smooth... perfectly paced... i loved it.

i really liked how you described marjorie grabbing onto the oxygen tube to remind herself to breathe. well written.

i loved the whole story, really. i should go back and read through it from start to finish. amazing job.

That was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Poor Marjorie - but, in a way, lucky Marjorie, too. I wish she'd moved on long enough to have a life beyond that one evening with Edward, but I suppose that wasn't in her character. A shame.

That said, Alice and Jasper's happy ending made me smile.

Thanks so much for writing this.

Yay! I'm so glad you came back to finish this story, it was one of my favorites and I was sad that it hadn't been updated in so long. Thanks! Looking forward to the last chapter :)

gorgeous as ever, love this story - its amazing!

A very sweet and adorably cute chapter!!
Great job, can't wait for the next update!
~blue

Good stuff! Thanks for the update!

Guess there's no need to ask if you've been to New Moon yet.

I love how realistically compassionate you've made Alice, how Edward struggles with his compassion and how Jasper struggles with his hunger.

Lovely job, my dear, as always. I love your writing.

I know I owe you an e-mail...life has just been insane.

Pat yourself on the back for a job well done.

I love it!
keep writing :)

I love this, you had me hooked from the word go, please keep it going!

Ahh ... that was a good story even though it says to be continued - it has a natural sort of almost ending- ok that made no sence- lets try again- i'd read it again even though its not done- great job PLEASE continue the story

it has to be that girl martjorie (whos making their powers/relationships go haywire) shes setting them up i just know it. cant wait to see it unfold.