 ajhalecullen 8/31/11 . chapter 1That was so cute! I really liked it :)
Good job! :D |
 sy 2/18/09 . chapter 1 Aww so sweet I loved it please keep writting |
 TheNightimeSky 1/31/09 . chapter 1Oh, yes! VictoirexTeddy fluff. Two words, dear: Loved it. xD
You know, I really need to fix up my Harry Potter fanfic. It's god awful, honestly. xP
I loved YOURS, though.
THeNightimeSky |
 Julie AV 12/23/08 . chapter 1lol. yup... completly inconspicus |
 theessenceofsyd 12/15/08 . chapter 1Haha. That was cute! You cannot keep a secret in a family that big. |
 Ronin101 12/15/08 . chapter 1Adorable! And that happened a lot in my family. _ |
 violeteyedkitten 12/15/08 . chapter 1Aww! That is so like the weasleys, and the potters too! They would all know, and Teddy and Victiore wouldn't! That was so cute! I loved the ending! Keep writing! :D
Love
Kitten |
 Your-Mother 12/15/08 . chapter 1 What the hell is this garbage |
 rileyluvr13 12/15/08 . chapter 1Aw, that was cute. I liked how you went through almost every member of the Weasley family and said what they noticed. It was a great idea!
The one thing that would make this perfect would be to space out the beginning and end sentence. There should be a space after every period/question mark/comma and quotes. I'm sure it was just the funky program that FanFiction has that messed it up, but I'd just thought I'd point that out to you. :)
Great one-shot! :D |