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ajhalecullen 8/31/11 . chapter 1
That was so cute! I really liked it :)

Good job! :D
sy 2/18/09 . chapter 1
Aww so sweet I loved it please keep writting
TheNightimeSky 1/31/09 . chapter 1
Oh, yes! VictoirexTeddy fluff. Two words, dear: Loved it. xD

You know, I really need to fix up my Harry Potter fanfic. It's god awful, honestly. xP

I loved YOURS, though.

THeNightimeSky
Julie AV 12/23/08 . chapter 1
lol. yup... completly inconspicus
theessenceofsyd 12/15/08 . chapter 1
Haha. That was cute! You cannot keep a secret in a family that big.
Ronin101 12/15/08 . chapter 1
Adorable! And that happened a lot in my family. _
violeteyedkitten 12/15/08 . chapter 1
Aww! That is so like the weasleys, and the potters too! They would all know, and Teddy and Victiore wouldn't! That was so cute! I loved the ending! Keep writing! :D

Love

Kitten
Your-Mother 12/15/08 . chapter 1
What the hell is this garbage
rileyluvr13 12/15/08 . chapter 1
Aw, that was cute. I liked how you went through almost every member of the Weasley family and said what they noticed. It was a great idea!

The one thing that would make this perfect would be to space out the beginning and end sentence. There should be a space after every period/question mark/comma and quotes. I'm sure it was just the funky program that FanFiction has that messed it up, but I'd just thought I'd point that out to you. :)

Great one-shot! :D
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