 Noofle 2009-08-03 . chapter 4I don't normally read Rose stories, but yours is brilliantly constructed, and beautifully written. It is a truly heart-wrenching tale. Many many thanks to you, and PLEASE update soon. The Noof is well pleased, as she has not found a new story to read for weeks.
Pretty peas update soon. Peas with gravy? |
 Arithon 2009-05-27 . chapter 4 I love this story! And am literally "on tenterhooks" for the next installment. (This might sound sad but I check by here every few days just in case there might be an update ...) Please post the next bit soon before the anticipation kills me!
No, really. This is beautifully written with a highly original storyline. And the anguish of the situation is so beautifully intense and heartbreaking. It makes me shudder every time I read it.
And I have a feeling that the best is yet to come. I'm looking forward to reading more ... And to the moment when Rose finally finds what is left of her Doctor. |
 Beth 2009-05-17 . chapter 4 Please finish this story! I need to know what happens! |
 elleflies 2009-04-01 . chapter 4I've really been enjoying this fic and can't wait to see where you go with it. There's not nearly enough Ten H/C out there, thank you for adding to that number! |
 Time Lady 802379 2009-03-09 . chapter 4Please update soon, I am loving this so far and I really want to see the Doctor out of the is terrible situation and back with his Rose. PLease hurry and update, PLEASE! |
 clarklit05 2009-03-09 . chapter 4Poor Doctor, go Rose. Fab story |
 scringestone 2009-03-08 . chapter 4Yay -- an update!! Gives new meaning to "cliffhanger." Your descriptions of Ten's thoughts are still wrenching, that under all that debris he still somehow knows that Rose is doing something really stupid to save him. |
 Lindir's Ghost 2009-01-18 . chapter 3Wow ... this is really powerful reading. Devastating, and beautiful at the same time. The language you use is strong enough to hold on its own without the supports of too many words, which makes a refreshing change. There are so many - too many - stories out there that try to be clever with their description, and just don't hit the mark. But you have succeeded, and it's not forced.
The connection between the TARDIS and the Doctor is probably one of the best examples of writing I've seen in a long time. I felt the sorrow and the depth of it. Well done, really well done.
As for Rose, she is spot-on. Every action is so typical of her. She's just ... well, she's just Rose.
I don't know if you're planning on updating this story, but I would be exceptionally happy if you did; it's difficult to find writing of this sort of calibre on this site, and if it is doomed to never being completed, it is a sad loss.
All the best,
Ghost |
 TheAngleofMusic 2009-01-02 . chapter 3Absolutely brilliant story! I can't wait for more - please update soon! |
 AlecTowser 2008-12-29 . chapter 3This is impressive!! Please update this soon! :D |
 ellijay 2008-12-28 . chapter 3Oh, wow! This story is amazing! Such lovely, lyrical language, but with a gentle touch that never becomes overbearing. You've set this story off with such a heartbreaking premise, and I have the sense that you'll take the time and care to make it live up to its promise. Very much looking forward to more. |
 Arem 2008-12-27 . chapter 3Very interesting! Please continue ASAP! |
 scringestone 2008-12-18 . chapter 3This is so well done -- your glimpses into Ten's mind are just wrenching. Can't wait to see how Rose and teh TARDIS will figure out how to rescue him. |
 DutchLady 2008-12-18 . chapter 3That is absolutely fantastic so far.
Can't wait to read more. |
 minicpst 2008-12-15 . chapter 2What a fantastic idea! I can't wait to see where this goes. Thank you. |