This is pretty cool. Are you planning on continuing it?

tthfanfic (dot) org. It's primarily a Buffy the Vamipire Slayer site, but you can post non- BTVS stuff on it. It's a very friendly site, a bit of a different feel then ffnet, but I post there, so I can tell you that it has a superior system to check your chapters loaded correctly. Just, if you want italics, you have to type it like this before and after what you want in italics, goes back to code I think, but I don't mind it. Hope you let us know what site you go to!

Mediaminer, Darkscribes, and Be Your True Mind are your best bets.

sorry to hear this. kinda stupid for a site to be used by the masses be difficult to even get to.

you are/were one of my favorite authors of all time on this site. as long as you keep writing, doesn't matter where, there will be readers.

naruto IS stupid. thats his shtick.
tentacle monster? srsly?

i guess thats one way to solve the "too many wifes" thing, eh?

Very nice beginning. I think you captured the care free attitude quite well. I'd say to make things interesting that Akane gets one up on Kasumi. "Oh no. He wants Akane."
"I think he wants Kasumi. After all she knows how to deal with demons." Oh and Dr. Tofu will be free is just a bonus!

Mousse was jumped over to the other side. So who will replace him ? I guess Neji will be the replacement. Will he also clueless?
"Shampoo say again. Neji too too stupid and never be able to defeat with bad bad eyes."

"Byakugan. Hakke Hyaku Nijuha Sho. Destiny is against you. I'm suppose to win over an unbeatable girl. Apparently it's not you." Bumps into Akane on the way out.

"Neji no BAKA!" Pulls out Mallet vs Peverts +1 1/2

"So that's the one." Passes out.

I'm sorry, but Gaara as Nabiki... this fic should have a choking warning just for that.


And of course the fangril in me's squealing over the fact that Nabiki was a valid target for the Souen-Tendo arranged marriage (until she, like Kasumi, foisted the job off on Akane).

okay... this is weird (in a good way)

hahaha...
I think I used all the good reviews on your other story.

Still, great fic.

I just can't stop laughing...

Please update soon and also, should we be worried that Kasumi seems to have experience with tentacle demons?

oi, only one chapter? ranma's got four.
where in the series was he (they) pulled from? naruto already knew rasengan.
please add another chapter, i don't know anything about the world you've dropped him into.

This... will be funny! Though Gaara as Nabiki scares the hell out of me, especially since I can still picture the scaky way Nabiki would occasionally dress in the Ranma 1/2 anime... ugh! Bad image!

Critics:
Alright now I am confused you give ranma all his abilities without penalty and have him flourish in the naruto enviroment within a day, getting people to help him from his own world and only having his over blown ego get him in trouble once. Then you have naruto not exactly stripped of his abilities but instead put into a situation were if he uses them he is penalized with something horrible, and to somehow make up for that fact you give him a one time unlimited wish that anyone from that anime can find, then steal, and then uses, do I even need to point out genma?!?! I mean seriously either ranma makes it so that he aleanates everyone in the beginning and then have naruto wish that he can use his powers with out penalty and with some sort of a boost or you are seriously biased.

Compliments:

On the other hand you almost did spot on representations of everyone in what their roles could be like, well except for the uchiha really, I mean comeon NINJA sneak around in the dark were people tend to not look at them but come one people uchiha look and win doesn't matter if someone poisons your food, or slits your throught in your sleep, or creates a poisonous gas cloud in combat, or use a technique that can't be copied and used without serious bodily harm done to to him, its only useful use is either in pitched battle or reconisance hello perfect recall of what you just did.

Wow. This has lots of potential. I'm really looking forward to see what you do with both of these. Also, Gaara as Nabiki? AWESOME!

:)) You need to continue this!