Aw this story was mesmerizing! Your writing was wonderful! I loved how happy Kate made Beth! Great job! I enjoyed reading this beautiful story!

u r awesome

Awesomeeeee.

you should keep writing this story:)

So beautiful! You should carry this story on!

Aw! :]

interesting

Aww... That's sweet! Very different idea of what was going on in those scenes. I like it!

So

you're already way awesome for writing a fic with a nice and sweet melty Beth/Kate center but i was hoping you'd want to go to 'out of this world amazing' and maybe continue this? I think if the movie had had your twist i wouldve loved it so much more :)

This was seriously adorable. I really liked how Beth felt different with Kate.

that was a really good story! i've always liked kate and beth together ever since i saw that movie! unfortunately not very many people write stories about them..but ur was realyl good!

Oh my GOD, sweetheart! This was absolutely amazing, and I am totally addicted to Beth and Kate now, all because of you! You write Beth so beautifully... no one could EVER write her like you do. The way you write is so magical, so beautiful; baby, reading your writing gives me a happiness that I cannot possibly explain. This was an absolutely amazing one-shot, and it broke my heart and made me smile all at the same time. This story is one of the most amazing things you've ever written (ONE OF!) and I am SO proud to be able to call you my beautiful girlfriend, fiancee, and best friend. I love you so, so much my sweet baby. Twelve days! I love you, beautiful! Thank you so much for writing this for me, baby... your writing brings so much happiness to my heart. I love this, and you. Thank you, my baby. FANTASTIC STORY!