my head hurts from trying to read that. i'm i understood it AND all but the grammer was off, words were missing or mis spelt and good lord it was near torture since i kept on a mental edit going... but it was alright i guess

Nice story! Feels like something Neville could put together one a thoughtful night. I really enjoyed his short chat with the sorting hat. Well done!

awwwwwww... that was so cute. You don't see too many Neville stories.

um, hellooooooooooo! i asked u to add another chappie a long time ago, and nothings happening! **blushes** ok, so maybe i havent been all that diligent either, but im working on it! puleeeeeeeeeese! another chappie! please please please!1

this is GREAT! i love it! this story is going on my favorites list! you HAVE to do a folow up/sequel, or i will come after you with a giant axe!

oh, I love it! the grammar could use some major improvement, though. AWESOME!