 Zaerith-Chan 2008-12-16 . chapter 1naww, that was so sweet! I Knew I wasn't the only one who liked this pairing, and I'm glad I found this, I was begining to think my fic "Stages" was the only fic with Sentinel X Elita. Good job this almost made me cry, I say almost because it was too short to provoke actual tears but the feeling was there, great work. |
 Armageddon rider 2008-12-15 . chapter 1i really liked this fic. no, that's an understatment, I LOVED IT! it's really cool . really deep, too. and because i'm a freak and b*, plus i hate sentinel's guts (he rpaed prowl. repeatedly. prowl doesn't need that), i laughed my head off for 10 MINUTES STRAIGHT! you would too.
can you please make sentinel pay? make it really scary and he (the wimp) will definately purge his tanks, if you know what i mean. have fun! maybe a flashback to the rpae... if you got the guts.
have fun! |
 Meiza 2008-12-15 . chapter 1Cool. An interesting, in depth look as to why Sentinal severed his and Optimus' friendship so severely.
I wonder how he'd react if he ever found out about Blackarachnia? |
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