This story is very suspenseful. My take on it is that the Goblin King was there but left before Sarah could actually see him. I especially liked how you used different songs that all included the word precious. Please do a sequel! Preferably with a happy ending for the couple of course. I would like to see Jareth and Sarah together. Keep writing!

The end? The End?? THE END? I THINK NOT! Hell no! No way! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please finish it! At least a twoshot? Please?

crepy ^.^ i likes.

I gosh, if you end it there, that would be way too creepy to even fathom. I would be so scared if that happened to me...

this should be a full story. it seems like there is more to it.

"7. an endearment; how you turned my world, you precious thing… Hello, Sarah."

I loved it! Talking to her via a dictionary? How perfectly novel. A very engaging first chapter. That's right FIRST chapter.

Be warned - oneshots will be NOT be tolerated. This story should be continued (replace 'should' with must)at your earliest convenience (replace at 'your earliest convenience' with now).

*smiles innocently*

Cheers!
Vic Wit

Really great story. You should continue it.

You know, I remember this one line from the song.

"I move the stars for no one."

Yeah, right. He still adores her. He didn't like to admit it then, but he loves to surprise Sarah about it now.

This is good. Especially how you began with the definitions. Didn't know what was going on until I read more. Brilliant.

My opinion? Not sure. The inner in me is saying to let the readers craving for more. But the inner fangirl in me is squealing for another chapter of Jareth x Sarah goodness. Aw, well. Do what you will.

I hope you continue this!! I love the way you're going about their meeting..

Wonderful tension. This would drive her crazy slowly! I like Jareth's messing with her head, or is she mental?
LOL Please continue

Keep Writing
SileaLove

This is a perfect one-shot. Not to say I wouldn't love to read more, but it's excellent the way it is.

Especially ending it with a Bowie tune? That's fate, darlin'!

Very witty fic! I really enjoyed it!

Oh wow. I got tingles reading this.

oh that was very good really makes you think trying to make connections with the various definitions and the story are you going to continue this story or leave it

I can't believe you forgot to include Depeche Mode's "precious" in this. Do you know what this means? you *must* continue it now. No excuses. =D

omg you totally need to carry on this story! So good!