 Edward's Doll 8/10/09 . chapter 2oh update soon |
 emoTWiLiGHT 8/10/09 . chapter 2I know she does.
Heather tel me *cries* |
 Marina 8/10/09 . chapter 2 aw I love it 3 cliff hanger! keep it up and update fast! :P |
 MrsEdwardCullen4450 4/5/09 . chapter 1heeyy this story sounds like it will be guud
pls keep writing moree pls :) :)
P.S. i LOVE ur stories |
 gtwilightfan 12/30/08 . chapter 1that really sounds interesting..
is james talking (thinking) or who is it ? |
 Obsessed.with.writing 12/19/08 . chapter 1OMG THIS IS SO CREEPY. Yeah, testing out fanfiction emails again. |
 TeamTHEFT 12/16/08 . chapter 1That was good. I like it. I would say more but don;t have time!
-jazzi-ya |
 Stronger than you since 1915 12/15/08 . chapter 1gah, update! i wanna know what happens! |
 pricel 12/15/08 . chapter 1Very interesting. Well done. |
 squody3015 12/15/08 . chapter 1what do you mean "Now she was dead"? Is Bella dead? Wouldn't that defeat the whole purpose of the story? Sorry, I'm a bit confused. But other than that line, it sounds like a very good story. |
 luv2read22 12/15/08 . chapter 1Cool idea, it sounds more like James but Victoria could work, too. It could also just be another random character, but to me it really sounds like James. Well, update soon(that is, if you're planing on updating)... XD |
 emoTWiLiGHT 12/15/08 . chapter 1I love this, as you know.
Haha it would be so funny if you wrote out the entire story and didn't know who the vampire was until the end. That would be kinda cool. (I think it's you, aka Bree, not dead and somehow hating Bella. No that doesn't make sense. Ignore me.) |