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SassyAni
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
So sad! I can't imagine LOGAN being the one to file for divorce, I've always thought that he is more committed than Rory.
JoPoGirlsKickAss
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
OMG. STOP MAKING ME SAD AND CRY. STOP. great job. BUT STOP.
apalusa-light
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
I was scared that something like this would happen... In some ways the grieving that she's doing here is very typical of her. It's one more of the ways that she's running away from her problems. I'm not saying that it's a bad thing, or even wrong. For a brief period of time, avoidance or denial is sometimes the only way that a person can cope. But I hope we see in the next chapters that she moves past her denial of her losses, and sees that while Logan isn't grieving in the same ways that she is, he is grieving. Hopefully we see that they didn't get divorced. Hopefully we see them together, even if it's only them grieving together instead of isolated from each other as they've obviously been to this point.

Great Job!! Can't wait till the next installment. You're doing an amazing job of showing this issue and the depths of pain... and it's a very cool way of doing 'flashbacks.'
PuppiesRCute
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
Update soon please. I want to see how things get better.
Fiona
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
Update soon please!
miz.misery
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
I wonder too if they were married in part one...
It seemed like that because of the way Annie told the story and how she talked about the both of them not telling her the truth... but now I'm not so sure anymore
LoganRory Fan
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
How can Rory not see Logan's point of view? And, in the same token, how can Logan not see Rory's side? As a married couple, they should mourn and grieve for their son individually and most importantly together. Their pledge was for better and for worse. So, please give us the next installment.
claireheart
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
this is really good. hope to read more. update soon!
bluedancer
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
oh no, he's divorcing her?! fix it fast!
Bella
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
The accident only happened a few months ago. Why would Logan wanted a divorce?
fizliz23
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
But the good news is that it's a flashback therefore Rory and Logan are NOT divorcing. :-) Update soon plz.
girlygirl1212toolazytologin
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
i thought she had a little brother... then did logan and rory really divorced??
toastloaf93
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
love it update soon please
iwannabegilmore
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
oh so good, instead of making in a bunch of oneshots why don't you make it like a compilation of the stories in one so it's easier for other to follow, just a suggestion. update soon!
Curley-Q
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
Excellent, Magnificent, and I cannot wait for more! Please cotnineu
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