This story was good, but would be even better if it took place after the Visitors came back as there would be so many directions you could take it in, I'm just saying, I would love to see the look on Diana and James' faces when the city below them starts spitting ash and lavay up at the ship not to mention the hot outgassing playing hob with the Mothership's navigation.

Signed SergeantHeretic, Freind of Obsessedromantic.

Hello, I like stories with Martin and Mike. I hope to see more. It seemed to me that Visitors being "lizards" could handle heat but not very cold temperatures. It made that sluggish and in the end they had to hibernate. Hope you'll write another one.