Will there be a ch 5

I wish you had finished this story.

I like it. Linebeck's confusion with himself and all the little things Link do that gets him all flushed are enjoyable to read.

I think my favorite thing though is how you've portrayed Link in this story. I like how he doesn't talk and I like his cute/boyish charm in the story.

Well done :)

This was brilliant. I loved how Link stayed silent, he was very much in character, as was everyone else. I loved this, and the last part made me laugh. I'd love it even more if you continued it, but it ended on an epic note.

You really need to write more! Linebeck and Link are the cutesy Zelda couple ever XD Love this story so much!

no offence. but why are the chapters named after fullmetal alchmist characters?

aw! This is CUTE, I'm really enjoying these...oh, how I love jealousy. -

Gah, I haven't been in the LoZ fandom in a long time, but then I found this little treasure. Nwehehe. I like this. I also adore your writing style. :3 W-will you continue? You've got three more to do.

haha! I love this! Please tell me there's more coming!

Such an interesting pairing, but I'm really starting to feel it, you know? -Thanks for opening my eyes-

I absolutely love the way you characterize Link without having him speak at all. His facial expressions and actions are what really give him life. Also, that's how I think Link should be in any fanfiction, since he doesn't speak in the games anyways XD

Oh, and lets not leave Linebeck out of this. He's just perfect and incredibly funny with his crazy thought process. Must he over-analyze everthing? Haha.

"Greed" is by far my favorite out of the current ones, but hopefully you'll update soon!

I'm really looking forward to whichever Deadly Sin you'll post next. :D

haha this is definitely my favorite chapter so far. xD i love tetra and linebeck's interaction here, and the fact that she has the gall to actually dump water over his head in order to wake him. and ah, the jealousy, how i loves it. the whole "you've got problems" was absolutely fantastic by the way, totally had me in stitches. linebeck sort of DOES, doesn't he? i mean he's sort of a dirty old man with a crush on the tiny hero (but i'm not going to complain, because i wouldn't have it any other way haha.)

*love* OMG BIALY-SAMA!

**glomp'd** You win! I like how Linebeck is all like "get away from mah mahn, ho" in his mind and Tetra's oblivious... XD

aw, the ending on this one was just plain sweet. x3 link is so cute when he overeats and is all slepy. and the part with tetra yapping at linebeck's ankles is pretty funny, it reminds me of a small annoying dog. and calling her "princess" - haha, great. i love all the subtleties in this one that seem to get linebeck's juices flowing - link's fingers grazing his skin, the nuzzling, the closeness of their faces. m i love tension. poor linebeck :D

i'm sorry its taken so long to review this! i've been busy with work, and xmas shopping, and birthday dinners, all weekend. thank you for being so patient with me :3 i can't wait to see what happens, and how far you're willing to push this. its gonna be amazing, at the very least xD

XDD *Squee*

I do not know most of them, but... *giggles* The fangirl in me likes

ah i love linebeck. you've done such a great job with the dynamics here - you've managed to make it lively and entertaining, and youve easily glossed over the fact that link doesn't speak. i mean, youve got it so it doesnt even matter here - we still get the point; he's still easily read.

"especially given what Linebeck’s trying to hide under the uncomfortably thin blanket" HAHA OH MAN NO WAY that totally just made my day. i swear, the rest of today could turn out to be the shittiest birthday ever and that would just keep me afloat. haha poor linebeck, it's going to be a rough next couple of prompts

more please!

kay before i start i wanted to point out this awesome little line:

'Thinking it makes it concrete and as soon as it’s concrete, you’ve got the foundations and they can start building your tomb.' that is such an amazing saying right there. i mean, seriously, did you come up with that on your own? i am fangirling all over the place to begin with, and i read that and i'm like 'dude, did she come up with that herself?' and then i looked it up and you DID and it just proves your mastery with words and phrases and wonderful writing goodness. :3

i didn't realize this was going to be seven ficlets over seven days. in my name? i'm honored! just try not to die XD and who cares if you don't know where it's going, that's the best part. you're off to a great start so far, and i love linebeck being a dirty old pervert. xD maybe there's something wrong with me, but the idea of him eying link's chest and looking into his bright little eyes and being like 'OH BABY' (okay not really but still xD) is just thrilling. i can't wait for MOAR.