I loved this story. Nathan and Peter have the best pairing on the show, so it was great that you dove into Peter's thoughts like that. I will never understand some of their actions either.

I beg to differ. I think Nathan is a nasty piece of work, and so i think he would be so cruel towards Peter. I think Nathan is so sick and twisted due to his father always expecting the best out of him. Perhaps the pressure to made him crumble?

I personally feel very sorry for Peter: he tries so hard to be a good person and a good brother to Nathan, but he's constantly being put down or something goes wrong.

I love this fic, it was well written and made me quite sad (but in a good way). You have done a brilliant job, well done.

i agree!
what are the writers thinkin,the brothers we know would nvr hit each other or try to kill the other,i know the characters are meant to be 'changing' but if it was really Nathan and Peter,they would nvr do that!

last night's episode was ok but it could have been better

i share poor peter's confusion! good work with getting inside his mind. i am actually thinking of writing a story from this point of the story, too. anyways, i look forward to your happier one, as well. let me know if you start it!

so true! i mean, i really enjoyed this last episode, but Nathan attacking Peter with a pipe? Say it ain't so! He's always been a bit of a meanie, but it always seemed to me that Peter was very special to him...so sad...

Aw that was beautifully tragic. I love it. It's so true. Oh poor Peter -hugs him- seriously this story is amazing. I love it so much. -cries-

hey thanks for the shout out to my story in the notes btw!

Intense. Great story...great script. Oh, what's happening to the Brothers Petrelli? Well done!