I like these short and sweet insights into Tenzou's life. It's kind of like savoring a small piece of candy more than you would a large cake. Somehow, the simplicity is more alluring.

This chapter was heartachingly adorable. Your style is very fresh, smooth, and concise but gives enough detail that invokes a feeling of satisfaction. Great job!

This was really nice. I got a feeling that I can't get from fics as short as this was one. Well done. Tenzo really is a great character.

I'm too lazy to login, but I have to say that I enjoy one-shot little ficlets like this. Even though it is not a long story, it has a great deal of creativity in it since it covers just about any time without any particular standard or chronological order. It has a great deal of freedom and variety in it. The writing is good and I'm really enjoying this so please continue with more ideas.

Not enough good Tenzou fanfiction around! :) This is great so far! If you feel up for it, I highly recommend you keep on! ^_^

I like this fanfic very much ^_^
And i can't wait until the next chapter