This is a really interesting writing style, and I like it alot!

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S-so c-c-cute! Love XD

That was incredibly, incredibly beautiful. The style, sort of sparse on background but rich in movement, it gave it a very textured feel. I liked it, if it makes sense to anyone other than me :]

This... this was beautiful. I rarely care for AUs but this was... awesome.
Have a fave.

Woo... this got my heart beating!

Mhh, I really liked this fic, I like 5927 and your fics in general but this was ...more. Very Lovely.

The 2nd person pov was pulled off nicely. It felt very real. I don't know, but I could imagine being Tsuna and being there. I think.

The (somewhat) language difficulties were a nice touch, too, and your depiction of Tsuna was very in character. I don't know much about Gokudera's character. But I guess it was well done as well, and it fitted him. He already suspected that Tsuna is the tenth, right? I can't imagine him being so nice to a stranger, he seems like a rough person in the manga?

Anyway, I say it again, this is a really good ppiece of work and I almost don't regret procrastinating my homework with it. It gave me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside that will carry me through the first half of my humongous workload. :|

Hope to see a lot more KHR fic from you. :)

This was really sweet, and written very well... I enjoyed it a lot, great job! :D

I'm not a 5927 fan, but this was sweet.