That was a great story!

loved it! the torture scene was vicious but so good ;-)

ZO MAH GAWD I LOVED IT!

Loved the fluff, loved the gore, everything! I don't know why people say the gore was too disturbing/unnecessary/too much, cause it was great!

Or maybe I'm just a sick person...oh well, but this story will be seen on my faves.

that waz SICK! But in a good way...and kinda in a bad too...
whatever!
that racoon face was intresting too, i like too learn useless stuff like that.
p.s: love the plot

just gotta say one thing... I LOVE ENVY XD
this was a little disturbing but it was good XD

I stopped reading this story half way through.
The Envy/Ed bits were adorable, but, the entire scene of Envy beating up Roy was unnecessary. I think you may have went a little overboard.
I guess if that's the reaction you wanted to get (mildly disturbed) then you did a good job.

That happened to me too for like a week before I realized that they changed it. Awesome story, I love it. I also love psycho Envy and Fluffy Envy and creepy Envy, and just Envy in general, and YAY evil Mustang 8D

WHOA! O_O
Nice story! o_O
I'm a big fan of Roy/Ed, but here Roy is a completelly A.ssh.ole xP
He really deserves to Die! *making an evil face*
Well, I like the story =D It's very coherent (many fics yaois aren't, so this is a compliment xD). I just think that Envy shouldn't change his forme 'cuz he uses the power of the stone to change, as he was without it, it was a little nonsense =/
Not THAT nonsense n-n no worry. Just make him a homunculo next time xD I'm sure that Edo-chan would love him anyway and they would find another way to turn Al-kun back n.nv

O_O . . .
I was sceaming 'Oh My God!' and covering my mouth when I was reading the Roy being torture part. Sure, I don't like Roy, but that mini-skirt freak was so tortured in here . . .

Ok, anyway, still like the sort of fluffy EdxEnvy part, Ed should tell Riza that he's being . . . You know. Riza will surely give Roy a bullet every morning.

Omg, this was so beautiful!!
I'm literally in tears, either from the actual story, or from staring at the computer screen for so long without blinking for fear I'd miss something... ^^

I LOVE the torture! It's so adorable that Envy can do that for someone that he loves! Aww!!

The best B'day fic anyone could ever get!!
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!

IF you were here, I'd hug you till you were as skinny as a matchstick!!
I hate Roy, stupid womanising jerk, the torture was gruesome and bloody... JUST HOW I LIKE IT! lol!!

The world is a bitter place without a little bit of arsehole killing no?

Luffing you!

OH MY GAWD THE GORE!

Very disturbing. Really.

BUT THE FLUFF!!

I can't ignore the fluff!! ><
I hate Roy, but that was brutal murder.
You should have him hospitalized or something instead.

Like the 'Mine not yours' thing, don't like the nail torture, cause I had mine pulled off (I slammed a car door on it...) and it hurts like heaven even with anesthetics.

T-T
Poor Roy.