I loved your story. There is one thing. Musia always disaplined his son with words not punishment. But it is fanfiction not fanfact. LOL

it kinda randomly switched in the middle but it was still good

i really like this beginning you got the characters pretty accurate personality wise

i love it but it's need all more Chapters

OUTSTANDING,BUT VITANI'S EYES ARE BLUE,NOT YELLOW!

:D Fantastic ending! I love it! I must go hunt for more stories of them as cubs.

-that description of Kiara and Kovu curled up like that was such an 'aw' moment. Too cute for words!

And I loved Nala's 'scolding' XD

Thanks for a great read!

AW that last part was adorable!

I like your character Banbe. The way you described him and his dialogue were very sinister and spooky.

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:D I found this story through a link on the TLKFAA.

I LOVE stories about Kiara and Kovu's crush/friendship as cubs :) Looking forward to seeing how this pans out.

Very g0od job. It was great. N0t as go0d as end 0f laughter but g0od enuf .KKFF)

I love this story! You're a fantastic fanfiction writer! I could just picture all of it, I even imagined the characters' voices in my head! This story was so thrilling that I read it all in one sitting, captivated by the words as they were translated into action scenes in my head...really enjoyable.

This is such a wonderful story, the scenes are so vivid that it's almost like mentally watching a movie. Good job! Sorry I didn't review all the chapters, but I got this far right now, and I must say this chapter (Ch.7) is my favorite...I love how Kiara could see how much she and her parents are alike as cubs. Very well written. Ok, now that I'm hooked (I've read this far all in one sitting and can't take my eyes off the screen) I'm gona finish reading this awesome story. :)

This story was written so well that it seemed like something that could have been in the movie. I could picture everything in my head as it happened. Of course, it helped that Vitani is one of my favorite Lion King characters, and you definitely kept her personality intact.

yay nice chapter. is this the end of the story? if it is you should put complete in the place where it says story status. you should write more of these. I'll probaly write one when they are all cubs. I looks like alot of fun. please write more and/or finish the storie if it isn't finished :.) !