:D Fantastic ending! I love it! I must go hunt for more stories of them as cubs.

--that description of Kiara and Kovu curled up like that was such an 'aw' moment. Too cute for words!

And I loved Nala's 'scolding' XD
Thanks for a great read!

AW that last part was adorable!

I like your character Banbe. The way you described him and his dialogue were very sinister and spooky.

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:D I found this story through a link on the TLKFAA.

I LOVE stories about Kiara and Kovu's crush/friendship as cubs :) Looking forward to seeing how this pans out.

Very g0od job. It was great. N0t as go0d as end 0f laughter but g0od enuf. . . . . . . . . . .KKFF=)

I love this story! You're a fantastic fanfiction writer! I could just picture all of it, I even imagined the characters' voices in my head! This story was so thrilling that I read it all in one sitting, captivated by the words as they were translated into action scenes in my head...really enjoyable.

This is such a wonderful story, the scenes are so vivid that it's almost like mentally watching a movie. Good job! Sorry I didn't review all the chapters, but I got this far right now, and I must say this chapter (Ch.7) is my favorite...I love how Kiara could see how much she and her parents are alike as cubs. Very well written. Ok, now that I'm hooked (I've read this far all in one sitting and can't take my eyes off the screen) I'm gona finish reading this awesome story. :)

This story was written so well that it seemed like something that could have been in the movie. I could picture everything in my head as it happened. Of course, it helped that Vitani is one of my favorite Lion King characters, and you definitely kept her personality intact.

yay nice chapter. is this the end of the story? if it is you should put complete in the place where it says story status. you should write more of these. I'll probaly write one when they are all cubs. I looks like alot of fun. please write more and/or finish the storie if it isn't finished :.) !

keep going!

Awesome and outstanding fic! Well written and deatiled! The plot was good and exciting...! I just loved the bonding and relationships between the two main stars...hehe i found the scne wif Simba and Zira pretty awkward not to mention sweet. Boy were they in trouble...lol! Very cool for Kiara to have that dream of her mischivous parents...i really loved this and i fink you deserve more reviews for this fic! Yeah keep going! All the characters rock! Vitani too!! She's one of my favs! How can i forget Zira and Nuka...acutually i love all of them! LION KING @ ROX the house! do you here me all you LK fans...whoohoo!! Ey you better make a sequel for this dude! Thanx for coming up with such a bril idea and end writing it. God bless you! You rock too dude! Aay!

The ending worked well enough for me. The whole story kept my attention, and I liked it. Two humourous highlights were Pumbaa's description and Nuka's "She's my sister, Mister." line.
Keep writing!

Great story! It sounds so much like the cubs. You should write more!

-Mandy

Agent 99 is one great writer. Go, 99, go 99. Bump it. Go, 99. Sorry. I don't mean to be that corny.