that's one of the funniest and best one-shots I've ever read...and I'm not easily impressed and reading a lot! congratulations! =)

rofl charlie craacks me up...=D

Nice story~ and funny, I liked it :D

Loved this oneshot! So funny and lighthearted! Great job! :)

oh god! how mortifiying! lol x

AW! I swear I was laughing like a hyena. Anywho... I love the scene after Bella and Edward's first kiss.
:)

HAHAHAHA
That's good!
Glad you put the year later thing in, I liked it! :D

I think I fell in love with Charlie . . . Or maybe Tim.

hahaha. so cute.

and Carlisle singing Britney Spears would be Hil-to-the-arious

I LOVE this! Its SO funny! TAKE A HIKE CARLISLE I AM SINGING BRITNEY NOT YOU!

BRILLIANT!

Love the story

Hilarious!

haha this is soo funny!! i was laughing all the way through :D
i am reading some other stories of yours and they are really good :) xx

lmao, that was so cute!