Hello, I like your story so far. I hope you plan on continuing this story! It would be nice to read how Hinata got there in the first place and how she really feels about her predicament. All we know is that Sasuke brought her there to have his children, but we don't really understand what's going on in his mind. thanks!!

whee~! im a reviewer!! ^^ bit hyper, but still one. why did they choose to kidnap hinata? is there a specific reason? cause they could just as easily have kidnapped...say...sakura or ino. dont get me wrong, i really heart sasuhina and i think your writing is pretty awesome from the little that ive read, but im a bit confused. ><

I like your story line, it would be nice to write a scene where she is actually in her stages of chidbbirth and Sasuke is kind and nice to her.

Just so you know, these types of chapters are not allowed on FFnet. Do your best with writing and deleglte this chapter later ok?

You're really good with detail, this is so realistic. I'm shivering at the thought of Kabuto's motives and intentions! Please update soon!

I'm glad that Sasuke was considerate and realistic regarding Hinata. I was wondering how she was going to eat and what she would be doing all day.

Wow, this is interesting. It's only the first chapter and I'm already hooked! I wish we could have more of Sasuke's thoughts and the background though.

...suggestions, eh? ~.~

well, doesn´t the title say it all? stockholm syndrom,
you´d first have to develope the story a bit before she can
fall in love or get dependant on him.

I think the first step is getting used to him, at the moment
she still is afraid and unsure of his presence, that would
have to change, but things like that don´t happen from one day
to the next..
so maybe you should go on with the idea of her exploring the
house and meeting people (like the staff or smt).
just to make time elapse. (well and there have to be more
meetings between Sasuke and Hina, or the story will never
progress..)

but I liked the start of the story very much!! ^^

Awesome story :)
please continue!

xx.Addicted.x

UPDATE.. SOON..

keep your imagination to this story..

I actully like this story it's interesting makes me wonder what is going to happen next. Please continue with is story.

Hey. The story's really good so far. Your writing is really descriptive. Update soon.

I like it, it's very good. Update soon.

Write more. i really enjoyed reading your story about sasuke and hinata. The way you characterized them so billant.

Wow.Just Wow...YOU ARE SO AMAZING! I loved the way you keep all the characters well...in character.that's very rare I am SO subscribing to this story! Anyway's take care and I hope you update soon! :D