 Chrystal Rose 2009-03-08 . chapter 1Great writing; I love your metaphors, especially. Fantastic job. |
 iamwriter 2008-12-17 . chapter 1Very well written. |
 Hutch113 2008-12-17 . chapter 1OMG i cant believe i missed this the first time around!
that.was.amazing.
i mean...i honestly have no words.
i'm supposed to be applying to college; instead, i'm crying on the inside. |
 DevilDoc143 2008-12-17 . chapter 1I DONT WANT TO THINK ABOUT YOU ALL BLOODY DAMN YOU
Write something non-morbid for once, something with no goreor death, and you'll gain my literary respect xD
Oh and you and Stephy both suck at lofty language cause when Stephy tries to use it she sounds cheesy and its funny and when you try and use it, you try so hard and focus on making it fancy that it makes non damn sense! roflcopter :P
But you're still good at stories. Better than me. Punk. Just lay off the ShakesPEARE, 'tay? ;) |
 tails123 2008-12-17 . chapter 1That was so incredibly sad. Until I got to the end and read the bold print and absolutely started pissing myself lol. But seriously, this took angsty to a new level. You wrote this amazingly, it was so intense, and it conveyed exactly how Booth felt. Definately one of my all time faves :) Taylor xo. p.s: hope my donation is adequate :) |
 CSI-4077 2008-12-16 . chapter 1That was devastating.
Very well written and enjoyable to read, despite all the angst.
I've given my donation now:) I know what reviews can to to raise a writer's spirits.
Merry Christmas!!
Leah |
 mendenbar 2008-12-16 . chapter 1Intense and well done. |
 Hippocampe 2008-12-16 . chapter 1For the authors in distress ;).
More seriously : beautiful story. Sad, but beautiful...
Bye! |