Incredible . One of best stories ever!

Tone exactly right! Couldn't be better!

"You gave her pointy things?" Emmett scolded. "And then let her walk?"
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"Whack him for me, will you?" I said to a blink he was gone, and the earth shuddered as they thudded to the ground fifty feet away." were hilarious! Fantastic job!

I loved how she hung up on Carlisle AND Alice. I was laughing soooo hard!

"That's it. I'm going to chew Alice out for traumatizing my fiancé." That was hilarious. Like Bella could do anything to Alice. Great job!

I hope Edward is as proud of himself as his wife must be. She always knew he could manage this without killing her in the process. It took a lot to convince him of it though. You did a beautiful job of sharing their journey to this moment, and I thank you so much!

I see why Renee calls her Nutty Meg! Although some of those questions are certainly legitimate, from a strictly human standpoint anyway. Amazing these two have made it all the way to the wedding with no slip-ups! They're made of sterner stuff than most! Good for them!

Especially for Bella, that was a pretty darn good bridal shower. Having Edward there made it a lot better for her, inevery way!

Loved the footnote about the rock outcropping Edward kept on their side of the treaty line. Sometimes a view is just too great to lose! Especially a view you can share with the one you love!

What is that old saying? What's good for the goose is sauce for the gander? I don't know if that's right, but I think it is.

Guess they both forgot for a moment, that if you continue to play with fire, you may burn your fingers!

It's fun just imagining a backrub from my favorite vampire and returning the favor! Lucky Bella!

Good for you, Edward! I think you're finally getting the hang of this!

He is so close to perfect, it's no wonder Bella has spells of feeling inadequate!

I too, like Edward, am fascinated by the way Bella's mind works. Must be a most interesting place to visit, but again, like Edward, I can't read her, unless you let me!