Poor edward . Bella is so naughty

nice . i love it .

I actually liked the fact that there were no lemons in this, though reading some of the reviews some didn't... made it more angsty and vunriable in how Edward feels. Very good, I LOVED that you involved everything that Bella talked about in Chapter 1 of BD - change of car, being centre of attention and... the shoe laces! Haha; I'd forgotton about those :L

I also like that it was all concluded with Alice being wrong at the end.

Well done! :) Emily xx

I've read this one of yours ages ago, and long had it marked as one of my favorites. Feeling a hankering for gorgeous, loving, angsty canon Edward, where else would I go? Thanks again for the pleasure. So good! :)

FUCK NO LEMON :O:O:O -_-

This is FANTASTIC! thanks so much. Story is amasing so much passion and love, I love it

Bella is so selfish. The way she thinks is totally selfish.

Ok, I am enjoying the hell out of this story. I'm so grateful to PoweredBy23Kicks for recommending you to me! It takes a lot to get me to ACTUALLY laugh out loud. And you have done it several times so far in this story. I know you wrote it a while ago, but I'm new to it. Thanks for writing it!

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hahaha gotta love alice!

HAHAHAHAHA i almost fell out of the chair! hahaha love bellas rants on her car :D ur awesome!

Great story! Loved that it was not just about sex- but about the emotion and meaning of it all.

Great story so far! Some good sexual tension while maintaining the depth of the relationship.

Cute story! I love E's line: "She had the instincts of a suicidal lemming. If she was convinced it was going to be okay, then we were headed for disaster." :)

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww tat was something have u got a sequel coming up cause i so want and expect ?