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Muzzlehatch
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Geez, even Rufus couldn't handle it!
number1kigofan
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
WOW! That was good I liked it of course after reading so many twisted stories before this one I can't be freaked by anything
JCS1966
2009-04-30 . chapter 1
Sweet mother of pearl...

Man, I wish I had that kind of credit Rufus probably used to clear out the store...

Maybe Drakken and Shego could try sniffing glue...?

Sick and wrong and GLORIUS! I loved it!
Jesse Lee
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
Remind me not to read one of your humourous story while eating. Nearly choked to death.

"Sorry hun, some freaky mole rat thing came in ten minutes ago, and bought out the entire stock."
PhantomPenguin
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
Very twisted, but very funny =D
RonHeartbreaker
2009-02-09 . chapter 1
Gross!
Didn't really work for me, until the last line, in which Rufus makes a cameo. That's funny!
Michael Howard
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
"what does have to do with a picture of m…me….me?”

Seems like a word is missing there.

Still, this is a terrific, and terrifically effective little one-shot here. Absolutely brilliant in its execution - and its denouement.

Kudos, Mr. Gray!
D the Stampede
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
That was just wrongsick. LOL.
BlueLion
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
nice little ficlet here, though you got a really twisted humour, you know? :-)
Anyway I'm glad to see you back on , have been worrying you stopped writing completely. I hope you're going to continue some of your unfinished plots ("Inside looking out" and "Bonnie", please?)
I wish you a happy christmas!
zardoz101
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
AH! Hahahahahahah! Seriously though, very funny. :)
RedBlueGreen
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Brilliant. It's just not right; but so funny, Kim and Ron roleplaying, and Shego getting scars on her psyche are always funny.

So, are we reading this wrong to think Kim wants to play at being dominated by Drakken?

The camera: was Drakken "Poisoning Pigeons In The Park"?
Visigoth29527
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Wow, the only way that could have been worse is if Shego had joined in...

Great, now I have THAT pic in my head as well!

Fun story to read, and a good example of "there are some things you just can't un-see, no matter how much you want to!"

Now if you don't mind, I'd like to get to my local liquor store before someone cleans it out...
PoisonousAngel
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so good! Hhaha!
sweetPixiesmile
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
So sick and wrong, it's gotta be wrongsick!

And that's why we love you.
creativetoo
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
LOL. Very funny story.
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