Truly fantastic imagery, Orange! Very dreamy and young and full of spring but also feeling the weightlessness of time. One thig though. The insertion of high school science clesses at the end feels wrong to me.
This line is killer though:
Remus tastes so odd on Sirius’ tongue it makes him feel as though a little dose of something illegal has been shot into his bloodstream.

This is so...god, it's beautiful.

So, so beautiful! :D

Ah, one can tell that you like writing poetry :-) This reads like a poem in prosa. I had to read every sentence very carefully or several times to get its meaning but oddly I didn't mind because this is really well-written and very enjoyable to read.

So... I was reading awkward summaries and then their titles to my sister, and this one was so odd i had to actually read it. I think you've won, actually...

That was... intersting... Are they high or something?

JL ♥