Weird... but good.

Wow. Not at all what I was expecting. Well done.

A'foist, oi though i' wus Mungoteazah! Melor'! Demi an' Bomba are Cockney here? ...no comment...

Great story though! -

Oh My GOD! BRAVO! BRAVO! You actually had me going with the cockney accents! I actually thought is was Mungojerrie and Rumpelteazer! wow! I cannot express how awesome that was!

Oh. Wow. Didn't...expect that... Cool. A dark Dem and Bomby. And I thought it was Mungo and Teazer!

This is different, but lovely.

Are Bombalurina and Dementer the cats Mungojerrie and Rumpleteaser, by any chance? (Sorry if that sounded a bit stupid!)

Wow! I always love your writing techniques! You should make a sequal to this story!

OMG i so did NOT expect that!

niice

I thought it was Mungo/Teaser!

lolz

xx

it's differen it's creativ it's pure genius! i love it!

OH MY GOD, WHOA.

I wasn't expecting that. Nice one.

Hahaha!

I so thought it was Mungo and Teazer...lolsies.

Favourited!