"it appears there’s something wrong with the emotional receptive features- it’s completely pants at anything that isn’t textbook."

that was quite likely the best bit in this story. Overall, it was very good- you appear to be good at doing character sketches, keep it up. I also like how you fed off what other people [and certainly I] see as something miniscule- the fact that nobody every calls Hermione anything other than 'brilliant' or 'amazing' in the books. Well done!

I have added you to my favourite authors list. : D

Wow, really great story! Hermione was spot on, very in character. Any chance of a second chapter? :)

Is this a one-shot? Pretty nice, I liked it. :) I adore the Hermione/Ron pairing, and good work on the background story.