lol! funny!

Okay, I am still frikin laughing, it was so funny!

Lol, i was laughing all the way through. But i thought it was usagi who hated carrots?
Oh well, i still love it! =)

I giggled all throughout this story. It was all executed perfectly, although I think Motoki would be too mild mannered to throw Usagi over his shoulder. That seems like more something Makoto would do. The whipped cream kisses were an excellent touch though, as well as how they made a point to double check to see if they felt anything. Very cute and fluffy, much like the whipped cream that ended up all over them.

Aw, that was a nice oneshot. It's great to see you writing again. Can't wait till your next oneshot/story.

Very cute story! I loved it. :]

That was amazing!

LMAO...that last LINE was PERFECT and thank you very very much for not making the 1st kiss PERFECT, cause I mean come on it's not always like that the 2nd and 3rd kiss sometimes are a heck alot better...LOL

THANKS:"D

This is actually kinna cute. Good job.

awesome story, it was very sweet and I liked the idea for it :3

keep it up!

oh!
THIS IS SO YUMMY!
u definately have 2 do a sequal or another chapter!

haha!! That was so cute!

this could totally be a chapter story!

Aww! So cute! :-D It was a very easy read. Nice work. :-)

xoxo

I like the humor levels in this one; it's light and fun and plays on the facts of how well they actually know each other. I'd like a little more of an ending, but great job! This is such a fun idea!