Just a little dirty (the perfect amount I would say). A nice short piece, well written. I was sad when it ended, but a clever form and well done.

Is so cute. Poor Vash starved so long for intimacy that he doesn't know if it is real when he gets it! (:

a little confusing, but i loved it!

uhhhh im confused about this... its just well i dont get the story line and/or what part is lemon

For the Record, I didn't hate it. I liked it. I just wish there was more. This is, as you said, a pretty dead section, and Vash does not get nearly enough loving from Meryl.

i liked it, vash deserves all the happiness in the world:)

Dead Trigun section indeed!

I liked it. Sweet and sexy without being a lemon, which those can be tedious (even though it's all I know how to write apparently XD).

LOVE VxM. Love them. They're such a natural pairing I think, -because- of their difference in temperaments. His introspection and worship of her is one of the rare instances in anime protagonist history where it's totally IC and natural.

It was also written well. "A stronger breeze blows in through the open window, ruffling Vashs hair against his head. It smells of the heat of the desert, but feels like cold water." - that's a great line, probably the best in the whole thing. Captures the entire flow of the story, in my humble opinion. She's -supposed- to be hard and prickly like a cactus, but she's not, she's soft and supple and tender.

Yay.

I like it! I think you did a pretty good job of getting Vash's personality in that kind of situation.

Sigh. I love Vash and Meryl, and you're right that there aren't nearly enough Trigun fics out there- especially about these two. You did a wonderful job of walking the line between Vash's fantasy and reality, the trick is to remember the things you usually don't pay attention to and make the reader appreciate the detail, which you did flawlessly. Thank you for such a great read on my otherwise boring day. Keep up the great work!

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I loved it!

And now i must go read Midnight Burn!

Excellent work. This is the first Trigun fic I have ever read (finished the anime about 2 hours ago), and I will say it was quite impressive. The ending felt almost open, which bugged me a bit (I like my happy endings solid and clear), but the style; the way you had Vash doubting the event was real, was spectacular.

Nice, I have really enjoyed it ;]

this is the first Trigun fic I've ever read. great job, nice POV. I wish it was longer though.

Do you know how happy I was to find a well-written Vash/Meryl fic? There are so many that just kill the characters, or have so many spelling/grammar errors that they make my eyes water.

So, I was giggling like a little kid when I found this. You made things realistic, which was really freaking fantastic seeing as so few writers ever do. I absolutely loved it!

Not bad. Keep up the good work with other stories.