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Jenn Hoffmann
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
That was bloody awesome! It's almost like my first driving lesson! Or well, all the ones my mum gives/gave me, except in a manual car. Lol. Harry's so sweet though, being very patient with Pansy. Kudos!~Jenn
Sunshine and Chocolate
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
That was a lot of fun! It was a really creative idea and you wrote it fantastically!
Grande.Vanilla.Skim.Latte
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
Lmao! It is times like these I am so grateful I drive an automatic. I think my inner Pansy came out the day they tried to teach me manual and like in this fic it was a lesson well learned.

Great fic, very funny and highly enjoyable!

~GVSL~
tar heels superstar
2009-04-30 . chapter 1
good chapter so update soon and keep writing its great.
fandemonium
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
This is such a nice light and funny story. Unfortunately that will be me in a few short weeks. I haven't got my license and it's time I learned, especially since that fact is keeping me from great job prospects. Hopefully it will go better for me.

P.S. I was looking for an update on Broken but this is such a nice, funny break.
Cady Lauren
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
Really cute one shot. Brings back all of my memories when I learned how to drive. All I can say is Thank God for automatic cars. I also liked the Pansy/Harry pairing.
Irish Whiskey
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
this was so good! i couldn't stop laughing. it reminded me of my first driving lesson.
wizmage
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. I could almost cry. Well, just kidding about the crying part but seriously i am a sucker for the romance. I guess that is kind of strange for a guy.
TG
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
I really like Pansy/Harry stories...you should consider writing a full length story with them someday...
Starkiller720
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
“You could speed up a bit, if you wanted to.” Harry informed a minute later.

She looked over at Harry. “What’s the speed limit?”

“Forty-five miles per hour.”

“Oh! And how fast am I going?”

“Ten.”

“Well, ten is a good number. Nice and slow….”


HHAHAAHAAH I'd LOL at that part... good story
ClumsyTonks
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
:) adorable, i had slightly a similar experience with learning to drive a clutch
GurlOfTheNight
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
I liked it
IndigoGrapefruit
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Holy mother freakin' hell.

Was there a hint of HermionexSeverus in this story? I think you've just triggered a gag-reflex for me because that is just sick and wrong. If you don't think so, then send me the link for a good HermioneSeverus and I'll judge after that but Hermione and Snape? Just not done. I know he ends up being a good guy at the end but - SNAPE?!

Okay, now that I've gotten that off my chest, let's talk about Pansy. I love the way someone's actually delved so well into the mind of one Pansy Parkinson. I mean, sure I've never read a Pansy story period, but this was a good way to start. You've got her sass and her devilish Slytherin indifference and arrogance, but then you added the fact that she's kept appearances; she puts up a snarky front and stops herself from giggling up a storm when she really wants to and I think that you've kept Pansy in-character but you've also given the readers an idea of how she COULD be like behind all of those faces that she puts up in public.

You've kept her fun and her sauciness (especially with Harry) and plus, you've given her a human characteristic that I've never seen in her before; she has petty school girl tantrums too. It's cute and it's quirky. I loved it.

I really like Harry's sweetness in this fic. The fact that he NEVER let her open her own door for the three years of marriage is astounding. I mean, that NEVER happens anymore, as sad as that may sound. It's sweet.

I almost wet myself laughing when Harry informed her she was going ten miles per hour. Wow, my grandma goes faster than that.

Anyway, all in all, it was sweet and funny. Nicely written.

I'll review your drabbles in a bit and I don't know if I reviewed your latest Broken chapter, though I did read it.

I'll check later. =)

Happy writing,
MHR
DCoD
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Still LOVE this one! Awesome work, my friend.. Harry and Pansy are so adorable together, and funny to boot!
dynonugget
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
This was so amusing and entertaining the entire way through! I'm not usually a Pansy fan but you do such a great job selling her character to us!

Great job!!
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