OMG!! Update soon. what's going to happen next? just something i've been thinkin bout for a while and would be a good plot twist: i always thought Riley/Rikku hated Mike because she liked him first but he liked Rhuben/Rumiku and she's kinda been showing him off. just a thought, you don't have to use it. that's the kind of vibe i get from your guys' stories. =) update again soon

oh, good chapter. I love the crystody pairing. it's really cute. i want to see more rike and ziley. and i want to see riley and mike agreeing to get along (but with a few cracks here and there). but its your story, do what you want. update.

YAY! U updated! Aw, i love the Crystody pairing. Crystal should've known that Cody has feelings for her. I mean it's really obvious. Anyway, update soon, i wanna see more with Rike!!

That was great, poor Crystal thinking that Cody betrayed her. Does this mean that Core has captured Crystal and is going to replace her with her clone too? I hope the real Cody can save her. What is his mom going to be like, and everybody else too? Can't wait for more, update soon.

YAY! U updated! Aw, i love the Zikku pairing. update soon, i wanna see more with Crystody and Rike!!

I like Rikku's dream. It's about time she realized how she really feels. To bad they are so far apart. I like that you have them texting each other, that is actually sweet. I hope Cody and Crystal are ok. Too bad Zack can't text them too, it is so great that he is so worried about his brother. Can't wait for your next chapter, update as soon as you can.

Are you going to update this again soon? Sorry, but i love this story so much. it's not like any other elemental i've read and i love it so much. and if u could make the chapters a little longer, that would be awesome. once again, i love this story!

I just read through all of this (took me about 45 minuets to an hour) and I think that it is one of the coolest elemental stories out there. It has a different angle than the others, which is waht I like. Update soon. I want to know what's up with Crystal and Cody.

Aw, I loved that Ziley moment. So, Alan was happy that Rumiku called Mike an idiot? I love all of the pairings. Update again soon. I want to know more about those in Australia and of course Crystal and Cody. :)

The first battle is done well and helps to show which powers the elements have. I'm new to the element fics so it takes me a while to figure out who each one is but you do a good job of showing the differences between them. I will read more later.

That was good, are they all in more danger being in 3 countries? I like the texts between Zack and Rikku, those were great especially the last one. Update soon I need to know how Cody and Crystal are, they are in the most danger, right?

Nice chapter, but could you make them longer? And they only seem to focus on Cody and Crystal. So yeah, make the chapters longer and focus on other characters/pairings...plz? ^_^ K thanks. Luv this story and luv u for writinng it! Update soon

Wow Cody and Crystal are all alone in Boston. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen to them. Where did Julius and the rest of the gang end up? Is Crystals dad ok? He didn't change with everyone else, did they capture him? Update soon as you can.

This is getting good and I'm only on chapter 3. I don't know much about the elements so it will take me a while to figure out who is who, but this is getting exciting. I wonder who is really robbing all these. I doubt you would actually have them do it so someone is controlling them or impersonating them i bet. Good story and I will read more soon.

Wow, I'm glad Cody stayed the same. Alot of changes tho, can't wait to see what is going to happen next.