dreamy

that was actually pretty good
you dragged it out well so it wasnt rushed.
and i think thats the only story ive read that bella cries because its so beautiful
kind of refreasing to heard
:) good job

I LOVE IT! :D
You should consider making an other chapter, like... the next day or Bella getting Pregnant, I don't know lol
It was amazing! I loved it! There was love, not typical lust!
Congrats!

oh my god! So cute!!

I loved the "I'm not a mind reader" line.

still think you should add to this and make it a full story! it's a great chapter... one of the best that I've read!

I love unrequited-love-that-is-really-requited stories. I love the torture each person is put through as they deal with their thoughts, not wanting to lose the other person. I loved the boy shorts outtake, and wonder why they didn't know then!
Thanks for writing this fic!

very good!

Oh...My...GOD! BEST M STORY EVER WRITTEN!!

Very nicely written. Loved every part of it. Great dialogue, not many people are great at it.

This is amazing. It's really sweet, and there's just the right amount of the more,um, seductive stuff. It's excellent.

Megan
xx

Wow, this story is amazing! I love it so much. All of those fall-in-love-with-the-best-friend-things are cute.

Now I'm going to read this story once more ;-)

please tell me that your going to add to this... it's too great of a story to just stop here.

so sweet :)
they're both idiots. you gotta love 'em.

Gahh, I loved it! Even though it was AU, it was awesome. I love the whole "falling in love with your best friend" thing. Good work. :-)

Ultimate fav! *glomps* You are wonderfully magnificent!!@!!