WICKED! =*^-^*=

This is really interesting, i'm at the edge of my seat. Although i would love to see more description about the planets and the scenes they're all in, you have a good style in writing, a nice balance. Keep up the good work.

omg,
nog een chapter!

strax ga je het nog halen!!:P
mah
deze was wel korter he!

maar jah...it was the only logical thing to do...??
waarom klinkt het niet logisch??:p

mahh jah,
dat was mijn prachtige review weer!:P

kisses!

p.s. keep those chapters comming!

Thanks for the update.

HAHA,
the winner :)
THAT's ME! :D:D:D:D

mja, even zonder dat gedoe,
interresant hoorsz je verhaal!
moet je wel afmaken!:P

nog maar uh 8 chapters,
hey zoveel reviews moet je mij nog geven !!:P

mja,
ga voor de 100 denk ik !:P

ennuh thee in oporto is voglens mij 1,8 ! :P

kisses!

This beat Warp core breaches by a mile! I absolutely love this story. I think you should expand though. Question though. What year is it in this story, and why does Mrs. Rent hate T'Par so much.

I'm hooked. This story is what fan-fic is all about. The story would never be filmed or put into "cannon" but it letas us release our secret wild imaginations. I wonder how you are going to make her conceived? Genetic material or chemical induced love slave with memories erased?

Hope you don't just kill her off. Hope to learn more about what you think Spock's child will be like.

jeej,
she's going to live with her dad :D

Jep,
weer fijn om weer eens een chapter van jou te zien hoorsz!! :D:D
en ik vind het heel erg zielig dat je aan je pws bezig bent,
ik heb dr ook last van !!:P
MAHH GA LOL HEBBEN!:P

ennuh,
prettigg 2009 en alles!!:P

okay then,
I'm glad she's doing okay...
next chap!! :P

Compelling story! Just what happened to Spock on that planet? Love the way you're building the mystery -- as well as the relationship between Spock and T'Par. The bond with his daughter already seems to be changing Spock, and I look forward to watching the story unfold. So keep those chapters coming!

Hi! I've just read your story and I'm hooked!

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. keep it up!!

Okay interesting!
Next chapter please...
really want to know if he's the father or not...
he is isn't he?
AH JUST THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!:P

Jep ik vind het verhaal leuk!! :P

Goed he, een startrek verhaal en ik vind het leuk...
mah mah mah waarom weet ie het niet meer?
Wat is er gebeurd?
Wie heeft hem ontvoerd ?? :P
Okay volgens mij loop ik te ver voor...
mah mah mah...
eigenlijk vind ik het wel jammer dat hij haar vader is ...
mah okay :P

leuk chapter marjotjuh!

Nice start, very interesting story.