cool great

It's not often that I've seen the possibility of the Kaiser being an alternate personality being explored in fanfiction. I'd imagine that if he was, then this is very much the way his thoughts would run.

Just one thing: it could have been a bit more chilling, perhaps if the Kaiser had dwelled more on what he would do once he 'escapes'. But overall, very good. I love it.

Very gooooooooooooooooood...

but maybe u cld put something wif miyako in it

? (**hopeful look**)

bye

Queen Isa

Yeay! I love Ken angst (and it seems to be hard to find! Either that or no-ne wants to read it - my attempt only got 12 reviews) A great piece, tragically under-reviewed. Will there be more? Keep writing!

wow,that was...creepy _ in a good sort of way. keep up the good work!

Interesting and kinda creepy. It's pretty realistic considering how he changed so much in such a short time. My guess is this is the dark spore talking, as that's the real reason why he went evil on everyone. Great way of putting things in perspective.

Definitely interesting ) Nice take on the Kaiser/Ken situation