|Reviews for Orange Retrospect|
| Fenrir 4/17/11 . chapter 1
and the sad part is that this is probly the way the blonde haired, ornge jumo suit wearin, nuckle head feels about it all. This was a beautiful piece of literature.
| Maniac Tenshi Makenshi 3/6/11 . chapter 1
This was a brilliant work. I love it. A lot. You got everything perfect in my opinion! It's creative, intriguing, truthful, and enjoyable. I look forward to reading the others in your Retrospect series.
| Lina Mistress of Elements 12/13/09 . chapter 1
I almost cried at the beauty of it
| gwen Gamgee 3/31/09 . chapter 1
beautiful. fitting. awsomely true. Yes, it rocks. Good job.
Now, things that could use fixing: the bit about Sakura becomeing the strongest could be clarified a tiny bit. I know you don't want to use her name, that would ruin the style you're useing, but you need something, because I had to read that bit twice to be sure.
Also, last sentence, "you still have one that couldn't make you happier then you already are"... yeah, I get the feeling of finish you're trying to go for, but tis still a little akward. I would see if I could re word it. Just an oppinion.
But yes, this fic is awsome, and I truly enjoyed it.
Hope to read you again,
| i-x3-shikamaru 1/4/09 . chapter 1
i dont understnad why you only got 2 reviews (now 3) youre an AMAZING writer and you have amazing stories/drabbles and they're just soo well written! keep up the work and always know that i read your stories :D
| beyondthecrystalsea 12/17/08 . chapter 1
Very good. I love all the pros and cons of a family. Good contrast. Kudos. Crystal
| Aqua Master 12/17/08 . chapter 1
This was really beautifully done. Good job. I liked it. Could have used a tad-bit more detailing though.