oh its really interesting, are you going to put the movie in this story and go further with it? This story is great.

Wow, this is a great story. I really hope you update soon. :P The story of San's childhood is rarely attempted, and seldom done well. Very good plot with lots of suspense (cliffhangers ftw!). Keep up the good work!

Your story is really great and unique!!

Aw, that was very sweet!

rawr! i will review and i will extravagantly explain how fabulous this story is!

hehe lol this is such a cute story, please continue your awesomeness!

Please update soon. This is a good story.

Bah! This is god! Where is more!? GOSH DARN YOU! *waves fish*

Wow, this was really good! Moro was very in character, and the plot was very believable.

Sorry, just one thing; Most animals, canines especially, can tell what gender creatures are from their scent.

Still brilliant though!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. This has made my day. Please get another chapter as soon as possible.

I don't know why you love cliffhangers, I hate them!

Though becuase of it I am very eager to read the next chapter...(this one was good, albeit sad)

Wonderful job! Looks like a great plot! :D

Ari chan

this story is awesome! ^.^
keep up the good work!

Cool!

Read the chapter, and just like N'jata's work, A Legend of the Past, a Savior of the Future, it's pure gold here. I read his story too, and it's sort of a basis for my story, Futuristic Saviors, I checked it out and the two wolves that are with San are named Kiba, the smart one, and Tsume, the easily enraged one.

I hope to read the next chapters.

You haven;t reveiwed for 4 months. are you okay?