I like it! I would usually go for Ayeka/Tenchi fics, I mean I have nothing against Ryoko/Tenchi fans! But sometimes the way that they write about Ayeka...its just wrong! I like the fact that Ayeka and Ryoko both got Tenchi! And just to tell u that your a really good writer! Write the next chapter soon and put it up soon! A/T/R4ever! !

Yet another fine story. I really do like your sense of humor. It is just warped enough. Well done.

Space...the place where cabbitslive...okay my Jean Luc Ayeka joke didn't pan out the way i planned to leave it, but that was oh, so cute. And a 'forest moon'? whats next? Tribbles? Once again your stories are proving to have that light hearted quality that I love. Thanks.

man this sure was a great fic. is it possible that there could be a sequal to this? it is impressive that you were still able to keep from being a lemon.

Isn't Tenchi the lucky bastard! I know it pained you to keep this sticky theme from turning into a lemon (pun intended)...actually, i think it a really viable solution to picking "one" of the girls-and Ayeka's dad has two wives... It was a good read. Cant wait to read your next!

You don't have to be the best, you're good enough writing as is. At least, you got more reviews. Anyway, good job, keep it up!

Hey i've been following the whole thing so far and i have rally enjoyed reading it.

Can't wait until the next stuff is posted.

I know, but there are so few well done lemons that I know people who won't read anything that even smacks of citrus. Besides, I'm trying to keep it to a level my 13yo daughter can read and I've pushed that in a couple of places already.

Somehow I doubt you'd get a lot of complaints if this turned into a lemon.

I liked this story, I was hope ing it would continue a bit longer. But I can wait for the next story arc in this searies. On with the hunt.

Seems I was Premature on saying that was the end of the story. Well A great story overall, and a good addition to your Conversations storyline. Hope to read your next epic soon!

This is, by far, the most interesting honeymoon fic I think I've ever read. That's not saying that it's bad.

Cool lets see what happens next

A well done ending to this side story. I can see how the later parts of your story come into being.

I love the saga and can't wait for the next section of the series!

pretty good as i i've said before

no character bashing i like it plese continue