And he had to wonder what, in his own personal lexicon, 'careful' really meant.

-As do we all. No wonder Snape drinks, he needs to!

Truly excellent chapter with the exchanges between Harry and Draco, and that extremely disturbing dream.

Oh, yes, and the Evil Cliffie. Liked that, too.

Best chapter yet! The whole idea is very original, but I especially liked the atmosphere in this chapter.

This, quite frankly, is brilliant. My only complaint is that there isn't more between beginning and end.

Wow...this is a very good stpry. I do wonder what the others heard when Harry said I'll be careful...*snickers*

Wow! Nice idea; I love how it turned from crack to something semi-storyish. Really funny too. I love how you wrote LV.

Very fun story!

hey, nice story! I think you lie awake at nights trying to find possible ways for the prophecy to mean not what it really means..."neither can live while the other survives"...like you did in SoS and here. it really interesting. this one was really funny, though. and really well-thought of. It was a fun read. Although I'm really grateful for you writing great fanfic, but I still wonder why you spend your time writing fanfic when you could write real fiction and become rich and famous.

and I'm a fan already.

...you killed of Harry and made Voldemort the main character too suddenly... but hell that was still Freaken Epic! lol i loved every flowing sentence X)

Aww. That was a lovely ending! Liked it a lot! You should've made it into a longer fanfic! It would have turned out amazing!

This is a very creative fic and I enjoyed reading it :). I honestly did not expect the turn it took with Voldemort/Tom, but then, it did make the story even MORE unique. Nicely done!

This story is great. Oviously, it's impossible to show Rowling fanfiction and I've never wanted to before, but as I read this I kind of wished she could see this characterisation of Tom.

The change of mood in the story didn't seem too jarring. It was the natural progression of the story.

This was a pleasant story, and a unique idea. Haven't read a fic like it before.

im not shure how i feel regarding this story...

I find the idea facineating, love the characters and their development... and yet i still feel out of sorts with it...

Any way, thanks for sharing it!

Good Luck!

I lost track of this story at the chapter before Draco gets taken from Hogwarts, and had nearly forgotten about it. I'm glad I tripped over it again. The idea is thoughtfully explored: you've developed it beautifully. The characterizations are revealed as deep and nuanced.

This is terrific.

I really liked this story. It was quite weird and enjoyable. Actually the feel of it reminds me a bit of another strange but good story called "Twisted" by cheryl bites. If you want to check it out. :)