Oh my gahd. He's taking him to Harry isn't he. But how does Draco know that Harry's the last Horocrux?

Must find out!

Cheers!

This is... such an amazingly creative idea. Wowie!

Also, so far, it's incredibly funny. Poor Snape, what about his spying? Or has Valumart not risen yet?

Cheers!

IT"S GREAT! I love the original ideas and the way you pieced it all together! One of my all time favourites!

sequal?

This story changed. The first half was intriguing and pleasant but the second half was like, WHOA. I liked the latter half better. You might have just grown as a writer in the time between or the dramatic turn suited.

I can't say I appreciate those hints (though I get that they were just hints and not terribly serious when they were blatant) of slashiness, that pairing just icks me out.

I ADORE what you did with Voldemort. I simply ADORE it. (If I could put that in bold italics I would but you're gonna have to settle for caps.) The way you changed Draco was...a good process. That probably doesn't make much sense. I liked it basically. And I'm very satisfied with your ending. That is rare. It's a shame Snape didn't feel more present but he would have felt forced if given more focus, possibly. Anyway, super liked it!

this is an extremely weird story, but really good

what kind of ending is that?

your fic is unfunushed!

"On a street full of ordinary wizards, you'd find the one Death Eater to ask for directions"

LOL

great first chapter

And with Snape and Harry and Draco all keeping an eye on him, I think perhaps it's possible that Tom will be able to grow up to live a reasonably normal and happy life. I hope so. Cinnamon.

"You're planning on taking him to He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named to be killed!"

"Yes," Draco said patiently, "but for very good reason, and he'll come right back."

Lol, very reassuring.

"Hi," Harry said, awe coloring his voice. "That's, erm, a really big snake."

*Blinks* *Laughs hysterically* You would not believe what my dirty mind did with that particular line...

"Or perhaps he's thinking of messy-haired, grey-eyed great-godchildren," he tacked on in sudden inspiration.

Somehow, I suspect that that one was closer to the truth. Harry can be so adorably clueless at times. Cinnamon.

You should add a disclaimer 'work unsafe' or something. I am nearly laughing out loud.

Aw. This is so totally awesome. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Hmmm interesting story pretty good all and all

I am so glad I subscribed to you and not just one of your stories! While waiting for the next installment of "The Pit", I saw that you'd written some HP fiction. I haven't been following any HP fandoms so I read this one on a whim. LOVED IT. Even though I had initial doubts about the contrived circumstances in chapter one, I kept reading and hilarity ensued! again I say, LOVED IT. :D You made me like Draco Malfoy! You made me consider Harry/Draco! Two things I was sure would never happen. I think you're a talented storyteller and I hope to read more from you. 333

That was lovely, I hope there's more :) the subtle relationships are to die for, some fics are just too blatent with the way people feel and here's a fic about honesty and the relationships are all subtle! Wonderful. :) truthfully.

Nicely brought home!