WOW...holy shit...WOW!

I pretty much stumbled across this and...wow...I'm...I think you just fried my brain...

amazing...

I think I'll have to do some laundry now...LOL...

Love

okay so i started reading this the first time and decided against it, but i decided now to try it again...

i have to admit, i skipped over some and was nearly laughing my head off!

good, but disturbing somehow!

Umm, wow. Very graphic (in a good way of course). I hope to see more of your writing soon.

So good. I love the part of Carlisle's magical cum, I would agree that the taste would a have to be a culinary marvel.

This was amazing and well written.

Holy mother of God that was hot, hahah.

This story is totally making me think twice about Edward Cullen. Can we share Carlisle? Pretty please? Cherry on top?

x)

So, so, so sexy.

Now I want doctor sex.

!

:D

I'm not ashamed to admit that I have a doctor fetish...

...Rather, a Dr. Cullen fetish...

XD

I loved this. LOVED!

Meadow Muffin

OMG! I LOVE CARLISLE! YAY...more?

A midnight housecall for a review? Definitely worth it... This was so hot I couldn't sit still to read it! More please? Something kinky, maybe?

You Have to write another!

AMAZING u shud totally write more pretty pls! that was awesome

Wow.

That was... if there's a word to sum up amazing, incredible, unbelievable and every other great word, let me know. I'm literally speechless; no words can cover what I've just read. Never have I been made breathless with dry lips just from reading. Kudos x 10.

wow... write me one 2. listen to yaoifangirl. haha

oh my goodness.

haha that was a big plate of hot, steamy sex lightly peppered with humor; it was delish! haha

but i feel really dirty now. very rarely do i feel dirty just from reading fan fiction.

that was well written!

OMFG! that was so amazing. oh my god. i have nothing else to say but wow. wow wow wow.